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TOPIK II μ“°κΈ° 54번 πŸ“„ μ˜ˆμƒλ¬Έμ œ: μ„ΈλŒ€κ°ˆλ“±κ·Ήλ³΅_Solutions for Generational Conflict

TOPIK II μ“°κΈ° 54번, μ„ΈλŒ€κ°ˆλ“± 극볡 | Solutions for Generational Conflict

TOPIK II μ“°κΈ° 54번
μ„ΈλŒ€κ°ˆλ“± ν•΄κ²°λ°©μ•ˆ

Advanced Korean for TOPIK II Writing #54: Solutions for Generational Conflict

μ˜ˆμƒλ¬Έμ œ (Anticipated Question)

졜근 직μž₯μ—μ„œ μ„ΈλŒ€ κ°„μ˜ κ°ˆλ“±μ΄ μ£Όμš” μ‚¬νšŒ 문제둜 λŒ€λ‘λ˜κ³  μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€. λ‹€μŒ λ‚΄μš©μ„ μ€‘μ‹¬μœΌλ‘œ '직μž₯ λ‚΄ μ„ΈλŒ€ κ°ˆλ“±μ˜ 원인과 ν•΄μ†Œ λ°©μ•ˆ'에 λŒ€ν•΄ μžμ‹ μ˜ 생각을 600~700자둜 μ“°μ‹œμ˜€.

1. 직μž₯ λ‚΄ μ„ΈλŒ€ κ°ˆλ“±μ΄ λ°œμƒν•˜λŠ” 근본적인 원인은 λ¬΄μ—‡μž…λ‹ˆκΉŒ?
2. μ΄λŸ¬ν•œ κ°ˆλ“±μ΄ 개인과 쑰직에 λ―ΈμΉ˜λŠ” 뢀정적인 영ν–₯은 λ¬΄μ—‡μž…λ‹ˆκΉŒ?
3. μ„ΈλŒ€ κ°„μ˜ μ†Œν†΅κ³Ό 이해λ₯Ό μ¦μ§„ν•˜κΈ° μœ„ν•œ ꡬ체적인 λ°©μ•ˆμ€ λ¬΄μ—‡μž…λ‹ˆκΉŒ?

Recently, generational conflict in the workplace has emerged as a major social issue. Write a 600-700 character essay on 'Causes and Solutions for Generational Conflict in the Workplace,' focusing on the following points:
1. What are the fundamental causes of generational conflict in the workplace?
2. What are the negative effects of such conflict on individuals and organizations?
3. What are specific measures to promote communication and understanding between generations?


문제 ν•΄μ„€ (Question Analysis)

이번 λ¬Έμ œλŠ” 직μž₯ λ‚΄ μ„ΈλŒ€ κ°ˆλ“±μ΄λΌλŠ” ν˜„λŒ€ μ‚¬νšŒμ˜ μ€‘μš”ν•œ 주제λ₯Ό λ‹€λ£Ήλ‹ˆλ‹€. 글을 μ“Έ λ•ŒλŠ” μ„œλ‘ , λ³Έλ‘ , 결둠의 λͺ…ν™•ν•œ ꡬ쑰λ₯Ό κ°–μΆ”λŠ” 것이 μ€‘μš”ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€. μ„œλ‘ μ—μ„œλŠ” 직μž₯ λ‚΄ μ„ΈλŒ€ κ°ˆλ“±μ˜ 심각성을 μ–ΈκΈ‰ν•˜λ©° 문제 제기λ₯Ό ν•˜κ³ , λ³Έλ‘ μ—μ„œλŠ” μ œμ‹œλœ μ„Έ κ°€μ§€ μ§ˆλ¬Έμ— λŒ€ν•œ 닡을 μˆœμ„œλŒ€λ‘œ ν’€μ–΄κ°€μ•Ό ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€. λ§ˆμ§€λ§‰μœΌλ‘œ κ²°λ‘ μ—μ„œλŠ” μ•žμ„  λ‚΄μš©μ„ μš”μ•½ν•˜κ³  개인과 μ‚¬νšŒ μ „μ²΄μ˜ λ…Έλ ₯을 κ°•μ‘°ν•˜λ©° λ§ˆλ¬΄λ¦¬ν•  수 μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.

This question addresses the important modern social issue of generational conflict in the workplace. It is crucial to structure your essay with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. In the introduction, you should raise the issue by mentioning the seriousness of generational conflict. In the body, you should answer the three given questions in order. Finally, in the conclusion, you can summarize the points and emphasize the efforts required from individuals and society as a whole.

κΈ€μ“°κΈ° 팁: Writing Tips:

  • 각 문단이 질문의 μˆœμ„œμ— 맞게 κ΅¬μ„±λ˜μ—ˆλŠ”μ§€ ν™•μΈν•˜μ„Έμš”. Ensure each paragraph is structured to follow the order of the questions.
  • **κΌ°λŒ€**, **라떼**, **MZμ„ΈλŒ€** λ“± κ΄€λ ¨ μ–΄νœ˜λ₯Ό 적절히 μ‚¬μš©ν•˜λ©΄ κΈ€μ˜ 전문성을 높일 수 μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€. Using relevant vocabulary such as **Kkondaeda**, **Latte**, and **MZ Generation** can enhance the professionalism of your writing.
  • λ¬Έμž₯κ³Ό λ¬Έμž₯을 μžμ—°μŠ€λŸ½κ²Œ μ—°κ²°ν•˜λŠ” ‘-으둜 인해’, ‘-λŠ” 반면’κ³Ό 같은 문법 ν‘œν˜„μ„ ν™œμš©ν•΄ λ³΄μ„Έμš”. Try to use grammatical expressions like ‘-으둜 인해’ (due to) and ‘-λŠ” 반면’ (on the other hand) to connect sentences smoothly.

핡심 μ–΄νœ˜ 및 문법 (Key Vocabulary and Grammar)

μ–΄νœ˜ 1. λŒ€λ‘λ˜λ‹€ (λŒ€λ‘λ˜λ‹€)

Vocabulary 1. λŒ€λ‘λ˜λ‹€ (dae-du-doe-da)

의미: μ–΄λ–€ λ¬Έμ œλ‚˜ ν˜„μƒμ΄ μ€‘μš”ν•˜κ²Œ λ‚˜νƒ€λ‚˜κ±°λ‚˜ λ– μ˜€λ₯΄λŠ” 것을 μ˜λ―Έν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€. ν•œμžμ–΄ 'λŒ€λ‘(ζ“‘ι ­)'λŠ” '머리λ₯Ό λ“€λ‹€'λΌλŠ” 뜻으둜, μ΄μ „μ—λŠ” μ€‘μš”ν•˜μ§€ μ•Šμ•˜λ˜ 것이 크게 λΆ€κ°λ˜λŠ” 상황에 μ‚¬μš©λ©λ‹ˆλ‹€. Meaning: It means for a problem or phenomenon to emerge or surface as important. The Sino-Korean word 'λŒ€λ‘ (ζ“‘ι ­)' means 'to raise one's head,' and it is used when something that was previously not important becomes significantly highlighted.

μ˜ˆμ‹œ:
1. 졜근 μ‚¬νšŒμ μœΌλ‘œ **μ„ΈλŒ€ κ°ˆλ“±μ΄ λŒ€λ‘λ˜κ³ ** μžˆλ‹€. Recently, **generational conflict has emerged** as a social issue.
2. ν™˜κ²½ λ¬Έμ œκ°€ μ „ 세계적인 **문제둜 λŒ€λ‘λ˜μ—ˆλ‹€**. Environmental issues have **emerged as a global problem**.

μ–΄νœ˜ 2. κΌ°λŒ€ (κΌ°λŒ€)

Vocabulary 2. κΌ°λŒ€ (kkon-dae)

의미: μžμ‹ μ˜ κ²½ν—˜μ„ μΌλ°˜ν™”ν•˜μ—¬ μ Šμ€ μ„ΈλŒ€μ—κ²Œ 일방적으둜 κ°•μš”ν•˜λŠ” λ‚˜μ΄ λ§Žμ€ μ‚¬λžŒμ„ λΉ„ν•˜ν•˜λŠ” μ‹ μ‘°μ–΄μž…λ‹ˆλ‹€. 특히 직μž₯ 상사λ₯Ό μ§€μΉ­ν•  λ•Œ 많이 μ‚¬μš©λ©λ‹ˆλ‹€. Meaning: This is a neologism used to refer to an older person who unilaterally forces their own experiences onto the younger generation. It is often used pejoratively to describe a boss or superior in the workplace.

μ˜ˆμ‹œ:
1. "λΌλ–ΌλŠ” 말이야"라고 λ§ν•˜λŠ” 상사λ₯Ό **κΌ°λŒ€**라고 λΆ€λ₯Έλ‹€. A superior who says, "Back in my day..." is called a **kkondae**.
2. 그뢄은 λ‚˜μ΄κ°€ λ§Žμ•„λ„ **κΌ°λŒ€**처럼 ν–‰λ™ν•˜μ§€ μ•Šμ•„μ„œ λͺ¨λ‘κ°€ μ’‹μ•„ν•œλ‹€. Even though he is old, he doesn't act like a **kkondae**, so everyone likes him.

μ–΄νœ˜ 3. μƒν˜Έ 쑴쀑 (μƒν˜Έ 쑴쀑)

Vocabulary 3. μƒν˜Έ 쑴쀑 (sang-ho jon-jung)

의미: μ„œλ‘œ μƒλŒ€λ°©μ„ 높이고 κ·€ν•˜κ²Œ μ—¬κΈ°λŠ” νƒœλ„λ₯Ό μ˜λ―Έν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€. μ„ΈλŒ€ κ°ˆλ“± ν•΄μ†Œ λ°©μ•ˆμ—μ„œ κ°€μž₯ 핡심적인 κ°€μΉ˜ 쀑 ν•˜λ‚˜μž…λ‹ˆλ‹€. Meaning: It means an attitude of highly valuing and respecting each other. It is one of the most core values for resolving generational conflict.

μ˜ˆμ‹œ:
1. μ„ΈλŒ€ κ°„μ˜ **μƒν˜Έ 쑴쀑**이 μ—†λ‹€λ©΄ μ§„μ •ν•œ μ†Œν†΅μ€ λΆˆκ°€λŠ₯ν•˜λ‹€. Without **mutual respect** between generations, true communication is impossible.
2. μš°λ¦¬λŠ” μ„œλ‘œμ˜ 닀름을 μΈμ •ν•˜κ³  **μƒν˜Έ 쑴쀑**ν•˜λŠ” λ¬Έν™”λ₯Ό λ§Œλ“€μ–΄μ•Ό ν•œλ‹€. We must acknowledge our differences and create a culture of **mutual respect**.

μ–΄νœ˜ 4. μ†Œν†΅ λΆ€μž¬ (μ†Œν†΅ λΆ€μž¬)

Vocabulary 4. μ†Œν†΅ λΆ€μž¬ (so-tong bu-jae)

의미: 'μ†Œν†΅'은 'λ§‰νž˜μ—†μ΄ μ„œλ‘œ ν†΅ν•œλ‹€'λŠ” 뜻이고, 'λΆ€μž¬'λŠ” 'μžˆμ–΄μ•Ό ν•  μžλ¦¬μ— μ—†μŒ'을 μ˜λ―Έν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€. 즉, μ›ν™œν•œ μ˜μ‚¬μ†Œν†΅μ΄ 이루어지지 μ•ŠλŠ” 상황을 κ°€λ¦¬ν‚΅λ‹ˆλ‹€. Meaning: 'μ†Œν†΅ (Communication)' means 'to be connected without obstruction,' and 'λΆ€μž¬ (Absence)' means 'not being in the place where one should be.' Thus, it refers to a situation where smooth communication does not take place.

μ˜ˆμ‹œ:
1. μ„ΈλŒ€ κ°„μ˜ **μ†Œν†΅ λΆ€μž¬**κ°€ κ°ˆλ“±μ„ μ‹¬ν™”μ‹œν‚€λŠ” 주된 원인이닀. The **lack of communication** between generations is the main cause that intensifies conflict.
2. νšŒμ‚¬μ˜ **μ†Œν†΅ λΆ€μž¬**둜 인해 μ€‘μš”ν•œ 정보가 μ œλŒ€λ‘œ μ „λ‹¬λ˜μ§€ μ•Šμ•˜λ‹€. Due to the company's **lack of communication**, important information was not properly delivered.

문법 1. -으둜 인해 (으-둜 인-ν•΄)

Grammar 1. -으둜 인해 (eu-ro in-hae)

의미: μ–΄λ–€ 일이 λ°œμƒν•œ μ›μΈμ΄λ‚˜ 이유λ₯Ό λ‚˜νƒ€λ‚΄λŠ” ν‘œν˜„μž…λ‹ˆλ‹€. '…λ•Œλ¬Έμ—'와 μœ μ‚¬ν•˜μ§€λ§Œ, 주둜 λ¬Έμ–΄μ²΄λ‚˜ 곡식적인 κΈ€μ“°κΈ°μ—μ„œ μ‚¬μš©λ˜μ–΄ 더 격식 μžˆλŠ” λŠλ‚Œμ„ μ€λ‹ˆλ‹€. Meaning: This expression indicates the cause or reason for something happening. It is similar to '...because of,' but it is more formal and is mainly used in written language or official writing.

μ˜ˆμ‹œ:
1. μ†Œν†΅μ˜ λΆ€μž¬**둜 인해** 직μž₯ λ‚΄ μ„ΈλŒ€ κ°ˆλ“±μ΄ μ‹¬ν™”λ˜κ³  μžˆλ‹€. Generational conflict in the workplace is deepening **due to** a lack of communication.
2. κΈ‰κ²©ν•œ 기술 λ°œμ „**으둜 인해** μƒˆλ‘œμš΄ 직업듀이 μƒκ²¨λ‚˜κ³  μžˆλ‹€. New jobs are being created **due to** rapid technological development.

문법 2. -λŠ” 반면 (-neun ban-myeon)

Grammar 2. -λŠ” 반면 (-neun ban-myeon)

의미: μ•žμ„  λ‚΄μš©κ³Ό λ°˜λŒ€λ˜κ±°λ‚˜ λŒ€μ‘°λ˜λŠ” λ‚΄μš©μ„ μ—°κ²°ν•  λ•Œ μ‚¬μš©ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€. 'λ°˜λŒ€λ‘œ', 'ν•œνŽΈ'κ³Ό λΉ„μŠ·ν•œ 의미둜, 두 κ°€μ§€ 사싀을 λΉ„κ΅ν•˜λ©° μ„€λͺ…ν•˜λŠ” 데 μœ μš©ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€. Meaning: It is used to connect a statement that is contrary to or in contrast with the preceding one. It is similar in meaning to 'on the contrary' or 'meanwhile' and is useful for comparing and explaining two facts.

μ˜ˆμ‹œ:
1. μ Šμ€ μ„ΈλŒ€λŠ” μ›ŒλΌλ°Έμ„ μ€‘μš”ν•˜κ²Œ 생각**ν•˜λŠ” 반면**, κΈ°μ„±μ„ΈλŒ€λŠ” 희생을 κ°•μ‘°ν•œλ‹€. The younger generation values work-life balance, **whereas** the older generation emphasizes sacrifice.
2. ν•œκ΅­μ–΄λŠ” λ°œμŒμ€ μ–΄λ ΅**λŠ” 반면**, 문법은 체계적이닀. Korean pronunciation is difficult, **while** its grammar is systematic.

문법 3. -뿐만 μ•„λ‹ˆλΌ...도 (-ppun-man a-ni-ra...do)

Grammar 3. -뿐만 μ•„λ‹ˆλΌ...도 (Not only... but also)

의미: μ•žμ˜ λ‚΄μš©μ— λ’€μ˜ λ‚΄μš©μ΄ 더해짐을 λ‚˜νƒ€λ‚΄λŠ” ν‘œν˜„μž…λ‹ˆλ‹€. 논리적인 μ£Όμž₯을 νŽΌμΉ˜κ±°λ‚˜ μ—¬λŸ¬ 해결책을 μ œμ‹œν•  λ•Œ μœ μš©ν•˜κ²Œ μ“°μž…λ‹ˆλ‹€. Meaning: This expression indicates that a second point is added to the first. It is useful for making logical arguments or presenting multiple solutions.

μ˜ˆμ‹œ:
1. νšŒμ‚¬μ˜ λ…Έλ ₯ **뿐만 μ•„λ‹ˆλΌ** 개인의 μ—΄λ¦° νƒœλ„**도** ν•„μš”ν•˜λ‹€. Not only the company's efforts **but also** individuals' open-minded attitudes are necessary.
2. 이 해결책은 μ„ΈλŒ€ κ°ˆλ“±μ„ 쀄일 **뿐만 μ•„λ‹ˆλΌ** 쑰직의 생산성**도** 높일 수 μžˆλ‹€. This solution can **not only** reduce generational conflict **but also** increase organizational productivity.

문법 4. -둜써 / -μœΌλ‘œμ„œ (-ro-sseo / -eu-ro-seo)

Grammar 4. -둜써 / -μœΌλ‘œμ„œ (As a means/method / as a status/role)

의미: '-둜써'λŠ” μ–΄λ–€ λ„κ΅¬λ‚˜ μˆ˜λ‹¨, 방법, λ˜λŠ” μžκ²©μ„ λ‚˜νƒ€λƒ…λ‹ˆλ‹€. 반면, '-μœΌλ‘œμ„œ'λŠ” μ§€μœ„λ‚˜ μ‹ λΆ„, μžκ²©μ„ λ‚˜νƒ€λƒ…λ‹ˆλ‹€. ν˜Όλ™ν•˜κΈ° μ‰¬μš°λ―€λ‘œ μ •ν™•ν•œ μ‚¬μš©λ²•μ„ μ΅νžˆλŠ” 것이 μ€‘μš”ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€. Meaning: '-둜써' indicates a tool, means, or method. On the other hand, '-μœΌλ‘œμ„œ' indicates a status, position, or role. It's important to learn the precise usage as they are often confused.

μ˜ˆμ‹œ:
1. λŒ€ν™”λ₯Ό **ν†΅ν•œ μ†Œν†΅μœΌλ‘œμ¨** κ°ˆλ“±μ„ ν•΄κ²°ν•΄μ•Ό ν•œλ‹€. (방법)
We must resolve conflicts **by means of communication through dialogue**. (Method)
2. μš°λ¦¬λŠ” 직μž₯ μ„ λ°°**λ‘œμ„œ** ν›„λ°°μ—κ²Œ λͺ¨λ²”을 보여야 ν•œλ‹€. (자격/μ‹ λΆ„) We, **as** senior colleagues, must set an example for our juniors. (Status/Role)


μ‹€λ ₯ 점검 문제 (Practice Question)

문제: λΉˆμΉΈμ— λ“€μ–΄κ°ˆ μ•Œλ§žμ€ 말을 μ“°μ‹œμ˜€.

Question: Fill in the blank with the appropriate word.

직μž₯ λ‚΄ μ„ΈλŒ€ κ°ˆλ“±μ΄ μ€‘μš”ν•œ μ‚¬νšŒ 문제둜 (__________).

μ •λ‹΅: λŒ€λ‘λ˜κ³  μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€


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