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TOPIK II ์“ฐ๊ธฐ 54๋ฒˆ ๐Ÿ“„ ์˜ˆ์ƒ๋ฌธ์ œ : ์ผ€์ดํŒ ๋ฌธํ™” _ the Causes, Limitations of K-pop Culture, and Literacy

TOPIK II ์“ฐ๊ธฐ 54๋ฒˆ: ์ผ€์ดํŒ ๋ฌธํ™”์˜ ์›์ธ, ํ•œ๊ณ„ ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์™ธ๊ตญ์ธ์œผ๋กœ์„œ ๋ฆฌํ„ฐ๋Ÿฌ์‹œ - ๊ณ ๊ธ‰ ํ•œ๊ตญ์–ด ํ•™์Šต

์ผ€์ดํŒ ๋ฌธํ™”์˜ ์›์ธ, ํ•œ๊ณ„ ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์™ธ๊ตญ์ธ์œผ๋กœ์„œ ๋ฆฌํ„ฐ๋Ÿฌ์‹œ

TOPIK II Writing Question 54: The Causes, Limitations of K-pop Culture, and Literacy as a Foreigner

TOPIK ์‹œํ—˜ ์ค‘ ๊ฐ€์žฅ ๋‚œ์ด๋„๊ฐ€ ๋†’์€ 54๋ฒˆ ๋ฌธ์ œ ๋งˆ์Šคํ„ฐ๋ฅผ ์œ„ํ•ด ์–ดํœ˜, ๋ฌธ๋ฒ•, ๋ฌธ์žฅ๊ตฌ์„ฑ ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์น˜ํŠธํ‚ค ํ‘œํ˜„๊นŒ์ง€.. ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ๊ณ ๋“์ ์— ๋„์›€์„ ๋“œ๋ฆฝ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

To master the most difficult question (number 54) on the TOPIK exam, we provide vocabulary, grammar, sentence construction, and cheat-sheet expressions to help you get a high score.

์˜ˆ์ƒ๋ฌธ์ œ (Anticipated Question)

์ผ€์ดํŒ ๋ฌธํ™”๋Š” ์ „ ์„ธ๊ณ„์ ์œผ๋กœ ๋ง‰๋Œ€ํ•œ ์˜ํ–ฅ๋ ฅ์„ ํ–‰์‚ฌํ•˜๋ฉฐ ์„ฑ์žฅํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด๋Ÿฌํ•œ ์ผ€์ดํŒ ๋ฌธํ™”์˜ ์„ฑ๊ณต ์›์ธ์€ ๋ฌด์—‡์ด๋ฉฐ, ์•ž์œผ๋กœ ๋‚˜์•„๊ฐ€์•ผ ํ•  ๋ฐฉํ–ฅ์€ ๋ฌด์—‡์ธ์ง€, ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์™ธ๊ตญ์ธ ํ•™์Šต์ž๋กœ์„œ ์ผ€์ดํŒ ๋ฌธํ™”๋ฅผ ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ์ดํ•ดํ•˜๊ณ  ํ™œ์šฉํ•ด์•ผ ํ•˜๋Š”์ง€ ์ž์‹ ์˜ ์ƒ๊ฐ์„ ์„œ์ˆ ํ•˜์‹ญ์‹œ์˜ค. (600~700์ž)

K-pop culture has grown to exert an enormous influence worldwide. What are the reasons for the success of this K-pop culture, what direction should it take in the future, and how should foreign learners understand and utilize K-pop culture? Describe your thoughts. (600-700 characters)

๋ฌธ์ œ ํ•ด์„ค (Question Analysis)

์ด ๋ฌธ์ œ๋Š” ์„ธ ๊ฐ€์ง€ ํ•ต์‹ฌ ์งˆ๋ฌธ์— ๋‹ตํ•ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ฒซ์งธ, ์ผ€์ดํŒ ๋ฌธํ™”์˜ ์„ฑ๊ณต ์›์ธ์„ ๋ถ„์„ํ•ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‘˜์งธ, ์ง€์†์ ์ธ ์„ฑ์žฅ์„ ์œ„ํ•œ ํ•œ๊ณ„์™€ ๋‚˜์•„๊ฐ€์•ผ ํ•  ๋ฐฉํ–ฅ์„ ์ œ์‹œํ•ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์…‹์งธ, ์™ธ๊ตญ์ธ ํ•™์Šต์ž ์ž…์žฅ์—์„œ ๋ฌธํ™”์  ๋ฆฌํ„ฐ๋Ÿฌ์‹œ๋ฅผ ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ํ•จ์–‘ํ•  ๊ฒƒ์ธ์ง€์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๋…ผํ•ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ฐ ์งˆ๋ฌธ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๋…ผ๋ฆฌ์ ์ธ ์„œ์ˆ ๊ณผ ํ’๋ถ€ํ•œ ์–ดํœ˜, ๋ฌธ๋ฒ•์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋ฉด ๊ณ ๋“์ ์„ ์–ป์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

This question requires you to answer three core questions. First, you must analyze the reasons for K-pop culture's success. Second, you must present its limitations and the direction it should take for continued growth. Third, from the perspective of a foreign learner, you must discuss how to cultivate cultural literacy. Using a logical description and rich vocabulary and grammar for each question can lead to a high score.

๋ชจ๋ฒ” ์˜ˆ์‹œ ๋‹ต์•ˆ (Sample Answer)

์ผ€์ดํŒ ๋ฌธํ™”๊ฐ€ ์„ธ๊ณ„์ ์œผ๋กœ ์ธ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ๋„๋Š” ์ด์œ ๋Š” ๋ณตํ•ฉ์ ์ด๋‹ค. ๋จผ์ €, ๋›ฐ์–ด๋‚œ ์Œ์•…์  ์™„์„ฑ๋„์™€ ์‹œ๊ฐ์ ์œผ๋กœ ํ™”๋ คํ•œ ํผํฌ๋จผ์Šค๊ฐ€ ๋Œ€์ค‘์˜ ์ด๋ชฉ์„ ์‚ฌ๋กœ์žก์•˜๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์ด๋‹ค. ๋ฉค๋ฒ„๋“ค์˜ ๊ตญ์ ์ด ๋‹ค์–‘ํ•ด์ง€๋ฉด์„œ ํŒฌ๋ค์˜ ํ™•์žฅ์„ฑ ์—ญ์‹œ ๋ฌด์‹œํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์—†๋Š” ์š”์ธ์ด ๋˜์—ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด์™€ ํ•จ๊ป˜, ์†Œ์…œ ๋ฏธ๋””์–ด๋ฅผ ํ™œ์šฉํ•œ ์ ๊ทน์ ์ธ ํŒฌ ์†Œํ†ต ๋ฐฉ์‹์€ ํŒฌ๋“ค์—๊ฒŒ ์†Œ์†๊ฐ๊ณผ ์นœ๋ฐ€๊ฐ์„ ๋ถ€์—ฌํ–ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋‚˜ ์ผ€์ดํŒ ์‚ฐ์—…์ด ์ง€์†์ ์œผ๋กœ ์„ฑ์žฅํ•˜๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด์„œ๋Š” ํ•ด๊ฒฐํ•ด์•ผ ํ•  ๊ณผ์ œ๋„ ์ ์ง€ ์•Š๋‹ค. ํš์ผํ™”๋œ ์ฝ˜ํ…์ธ  ์ƒ์‚ฐ ๋ฐฉ์‹์€ ์ฐฝ์˜์„ฑ์„ ์ €ํ•ดํ•˜๋ฉฐ, ์—ฐ์Šต์ƒ๋“ค์˜ ์ธ๊ถŒ ๋ฌธ์ œ๋‚˜ ๊ณผ๋„ํ•œ ์ƒ์—…์ฃผ์˜์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๋น„ํŒ๋„ ๊พธ์ค€ํžˆ ์ œ๊ธฐ๋˜๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค. ์ด๋Ÿฌํ•œ ํ•œ๊ณ„๋ฅผ ๊ทน๋ณตํ•จ์œผ๋กœ์จ ์ผ€์ดํŒ์€ ๋”์šฑ ์„ฑ์ˆ™ํ•œ ๋ฌธํ™”๋กœ ์ž๋ฆฌ๋งค๊น€ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์„ ๊ฒƒ์ด๋‹ค. ์™ธ๊ตญ์ธ ํ•™์Šต์ž๋กœ์„œ ์ผ€์ดํŒ ๋ฌธํ™”๋ฅผ ๋ฐ”๋žŒ์งํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์ˆ˜์šฉํ•˜๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด์„œ๋Š” ๋น„ํŒ์  ์‹œ๊ฐ์„ ๊ฐ–๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ค‘์š”ํ•˜๋‹ค. ๋‹จ์ˆœํžˆ ์†Œ๋น„ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์— ๊ทธ์น˜์ง€ ์•Š๊ณ , ์ผ€์ดํŒ์— ๋‹ด๊ธด ํ•œ๊ตญ ์‚ฌํšŒ์™€ ์—ญ์‚ฌ, ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์˜ˆ์ˆ ์  ๊ฐ€์น˜๋ฅผ ํ•จ๊ป˜ ํƒ๊ตฌํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฌธํ™”์  ๋ฆฌํ„ฐ๋Ÿฌ์‹œ๋ฅผ ํ•จ์–‘ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ํ•„์š”ํ•˜๋‹ค.

There are complex reasons why K-pop culture is globally popular. First, its high musical quality and visually stunning performances have captured the public's attention. As the nationalities of members have diversified, the expandability of the fandom has also become a factor that cannot be ignored. In addition, active fan communication through social media has given fans a sense of belonging and intimacy. However, for the K-pop industry to continue to grow, there are no small number of challenges to be solved. Standardized content production methods hinder creativity, and criticisms of trainee human rights issues and excessive commercialism are also being continuously raised. By overcoming these limitations, K-pop will be able to establish itself as a more mature culture. As a foreign learner, it is important to have a critical perspective in order to accept K-pop culture in a desirable way. It is necessary to cultivate a cultural literacy that explores the social, historical, and artistic values contained in K-pop, beyond simply consuming it.

ํ•ต์‹ฌ ์–ดํœ˜ ๋ฐ ๋ฌธ๋ฒ• (Key Vocabulary and Grammar)

๋ฌด์‹œํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์—†๋Š” [๋ฌด์‹œํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์—†๋Š”] - Cannot be ignored

์˜๋ฏธ: ์–ด๋–ค ํ˜„์ƒ์ด๋‚˜ ์‚ฌ์‹ค์˜ ์ค‘์š”์„ฑ์ด ์ปค์„œ ๊ฐ„๊ณผํ•˜๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ๊ทธ๋ƒฅ ๋„˜๊ธธ ์ˆ˜ ์—†๋‹ค๋Š” ์˜๋ฏธ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ฃผ๋กœ ๊ธ์ •์  ๋˜๋Š” ๋ถ€์ •์  ์ค‘์š”์„ฑ์„ ๋ชจ๋‘ ๊ฐ•์กฐํ•  ๋•Œ ์‚ฌ์šฉ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

Meaning: It means that the importance of a certain phenomenon or fact is so great that it cannot be overlooked or passed over. It is mainly used to emphasize both positive and negative importance.

์˜ˆ์‹œ:

1. ํ•œ๊ตญ์˜ ๋น ๋ฅธ ๊ฒฝ์ œ ์„ฑ์žฅ์€ ๋ฌด์‹œํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์—†๋Š” ์„ธ๊ณ„์  ํ˜„์ƒ์ด๋‹ค.

2. ์ด๋ฒˆ ํ”„๋กœ์ ํŠธ์˜ ์‹คํŒจ๋Š” ๊ทธ์˜ ์ž˜๋ชป์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ๋ฌด์‹œํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์—†๋Š” ๋ถ€๋ถ„์ด ์žˆ๋‹ค.

Examples:

1. Korea's rapid economic growth is a globally significant phenomenon that cannot be ignored.

2. There is a part of the failure of this project that cannot be ignored as his fault.

๊ณผ์ œ๋„ ์ ์ง€ ์•Š๋‹ค [๊ณผ์ œ๋„ ์ ์ฐŒ ์•ˆํƒ€] - There are no small number of challenges

์˜๋ฏธ: ํ•ด๊ฒฐํ•ด์•ผ ํ•  ๋ฌธ์ œ๋‚˜ ํ•ด์•ผ ํ•  ์ผ์ด ๋งŽ๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ๊ฐ•์กฐํ•˜๋Š” ํ‘œํ˜„์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. '๊ณผ์ œ๊ฐ€ ๋งŽ๋‹ค'๋ณด๋‹ค ๋” ๊ฐ•ํ•œ ๋‰˜์•™์Šค๋ฅผ ์ „๋‹ฌํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

Meaning: This expression emphasizes that there are many problems to be solved or many tasks to be done. It conveys a stronger nuance than 'there are many challenges'.

์˜ˆ์‹œ:

1. ํ™˜๊ฒฝ ๋ณดํ˜ธ๋ฅผ ์œ„ํ•ด์„œ๋Š” ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๊ฐ€ ํ•ด๊ฒฐํ•ด์•ผ ํ•  ๊ณผ์ œ๋„ ์ ์ง€ ์•Š๋‹ค.

2. ์ด ํšŒ์‚ฌ๊ฐ€ ์ง€์†์ ์œผ๋กœ ์„ฑ์žฅํ•˜๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด์„œ๋Š” ๊ณผ์ œ๋„ ์ ์ง€ ์•Š๋‹ค.

Examples:

1. For environmental protection, there are no small number of challenges we need to solve.

2. For this company to continue to grow, there are no small number of challenges.

๋ฐ”๋žŒ์งํ•˜๊ฒŒ [๋ฐ”๋žŒ์ง€์นด๊ฒŒ] - Desirably, in a desirable way

์˜๋ฏธ: ์–ด๋–ค ์ผ์ด๋‚˜ ํ–‰๋™์ด ์ด์ƒ์ ์ด๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ์ข‹์€ ๋ฐฉํ–ฅ์œผ๋กœ ์ด๋ฃจ์–ด์ง€๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ์˜๋ฏธํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ธ์ •์ ์ธ ํ‰๊ฐ€๋‚˜ ์ œ์•ˆ์„ ํ•  ๋•Œ ์‚ฌ์šฉ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

Meaning: It refers to a certain task or action being done in an ideal or good direction. It is used when making a positive evaluation or suggestion.

์˜ˆ์‹œ:

1. ํ•™์ƒ๋“ค์€ ๋ฐ”๋žŒ์งํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์นœ๊ตฌ๋“ค๊ณผ ์†Œํ†ตํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฒ•์„ ๋ฐฐ์›Œ์•ผ ํ•œ๋‹ค.

2. ์ด ๋ฌธ์ œ๋ฅผ ๋ฐ”๋žŒ์งํ•˜๊ฒŒ ํ•ด๊ฒฐํ•˜๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด ๋ชจ๋‘์˜ ๋…ธ๋ ฅ์ด ํ•„์š”ํ•˜๋‹ค.

Examples:

1. Students must learn how to communicate with friends in a desirable way.

2. Everyone's effort is needed to solve this problem in a desirable way.

-(์œผ)ใ…์œผ๋กœ์จ - By doing something

์˜๋ฏธ: ์–ด๋–ค ํ–‰๋™์ด ๋’ค์— ์˜ค๋Š” ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋‚˜ ์ƒํƒœ์˜ ์ˆ˜๋‹จ์ด๋‚˜ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด ๋จ์„ ๋‚˜ํƒ€๋‚ด๋Š” ๋ฌธ๋ฒ•์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ฃผ๋กœ ๊ณต์‹์ ์ธ ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ๋‚˜ ๋ฐœํ‘œ์— ์ž์ฃผ ์‚ฌ์šฉ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

Meaning: This grammar point indicates that a certain action becomes the means or method for the subsequent result or state. It is often used in formal writing or presentations.

์˜ˆ์‹œ:

1. ๋Š์ž„์—†์ด ๋…ธ๋ ฅํ•จ์œผ๋กœ์จ ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ๋” ๋‚˜์€ ๋ฏธ๋ž˜๋ฅผ ๋งŒ๋“ค ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‹ค.

2. ์ด๋ฒˆ ์ •์ฑ…์„ ๋„์ž…ํ•จ์œผ๋กœ์จ ์‚ฌํšŒ ๋ณต์ง€๊ฐ€ ํฌ๊ฒŒ ๊ฐœ์„ ๋˜์—ˆ๋‹ค.

Examples:

1. By constantly making an effort, we can create a better future.

2. By introducing this policy, social welfare has been greatly improved.

~์— ๊ทธ์น˜์ง€ ์•Š๊ณ  - Not just stopping at ~

์˜๋ฏธ: ์–ด๋–ค ํ–‰๋™์ด๋‚˜ ์ƒํƒœ๊ฐ€ ํ•œ ๊ฐ€์ง€์— ๋จธ๋ฌด๋ฅด์ง€ ์•Š๊ณ , ๋” ๋‚˜์•„๊ฐ€ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ํ–‰๋™์ด๋‚˜ ์ƒํƒœ๋กœ ์ด์–ด์ง„๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ๋‚˜ํƒ€๋‚ด๋Š” ํ‘œํ˜„์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

Meaning: This expression indicates that a certain action or state does not stop at one thing, but goes on to lead to another action or state.

์˜ˆ์‹œ:

1. ๊ทธ๋Š” ๋‹จ์ˆœํžˆ ์ฑ…์„ ์ฝ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์— ๊ทธ์น˜์ง€ ์•Š๊ณ , ์ง์ ‘ ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ–ˆ๋‹ค.

2. ์ด๋ฒˆ ํ–‰์‚ฌ๋Š” ๊ธฐ๋ถ€๊ธˆ์„ ๋ชจ์œผ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์— ๊ทธ์น˜์ง€ ์•Š๊ณ , ์‚ฌํšŒ์  ์ธ์‹ ๊ฐœ์„ ์—๋„ ๊ธฐ์—ฌํ–ˆ๋‹ค.

Examples:

1. He didn't just stop at reading books, he started writing himself.

2. This event didn't just stop at raising donations, it also contributed to improving social awareness.

์‹ค๋ ฅ ์ ๊ฒ€ ๋ฌธ์ œ (Practice Question)

๋‹ค์Œ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์„ ์˜ฌ๋ฐ”๋ฅธ ์–ดํœ˜์™€ ๋ฌธ๋ฒ•์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์—ฌ ์™„์„ฑํ•˜์„ธ์š”.

Complete the following sentences using the correct vocabulary and grammar.

1. ๊ฒฝ์ œ ์„ฑ์žฅ์€ ํ™˜๊ฒฝ ๋ฌธ์ œ๋ฅผ _________ __________ _________ __________. (ํ•ด๊ฒฐํ•ด์•ผ ํ•  ๊ณผ์ œ๊ฐ€ ๋งŽ๋‹ค)

2. ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ๊ธฐ์ˆ ์„ __________ __________ __________ ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ์ƒํ™œ์˜ ํŽธ๋ฆฌํ•จ์„ ์–ป์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์—ˆ๋‹ค. (๋„์ž…ํ•จ์œผ๋กœ์จ)

์ •๋‹ต: 1. ํ•ด๊ฒฐํ•ด์•ผ ํ•  ๊ณผ์ œ๋„ ์ ์ง€ ์•Š๋‹ค. 2. ๋„์ž…ํ•จ์œผ๋กœ์จ

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