๐Ÿ–‹️THE KEY OF KOREAN DREAM⑥ : Top 10 Essential Data-Driven Insights for the TOPIK Writing Section

TOPIK ์“ฐ๊ธฐ ์˜์—ญ: ํ•ฉ๊ฒฉ์„ ์œ„ํ•œ ํ•ต์‹ฌ ๋ฐ์ดํ„ฐ 10๊ฐ€์ง€ ์ „๋žต | TOPIK Writing: 10 Key Data Points for Success Strategy

TOPIK Writing: 10 Key Data Points for Success Strategy

์“ฐ๊ธฐ์˜์—ญ TOPIK

์•ˆ๋…•ํ•˜์„ธ์š”! TOPIK II ์“ฐ๊ธฐ ์˜์—ญ์€ ์ „์ฒด ์‹œํ—˜ ์ ์ˆ˜์˜ 33.3% (100์ )๋ฅผ ์ฐจ์ง€ํ•˜๋Š” ์ค‘์š”ํ•œ ๋ถ€๋ถ„์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์“ฐ๊ธฐ ์˜์—ญ์˜ ๊ตฌ์กฐ์™€ ์ฑ„์  ๋ฐฉ์‹์„ ์ดํ•ดํ•˜๊ณ  ์ „๋žต์ ์œผ๋กœ ์ ‘๊ทผํ•˜๋ฉด **๊ณ ๋“์ **์„ ์–ป์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

Hello! The TOPIK II Writing section is crucial, accounting for 100 points (33.3%) of the total score. Understanding its structure and scoring, along with a strategic approach, is key to achieving a **high score**.


๐ŸŽฏ TOPIK ์“ฐ๊ธฐ, ํ•ต์‹ฌ ๋ฐ์ดํ„ฐ 10๊ฐ€์ง€ ์ „๋žต

๐Ÿ“– ์„ ํ–‰ ํ•™์Šต: ํ•„์ˆ˜ ์–ดํœ˜ ๋ฐ ๋ฌธ๋ฒ•

๋ฐฐ์  | Bae-jeom (Scoring distribution)

๋…ผ์ˆ  | Non-sul (Essay writing)

๊ณ ๋“์  | Go-deuk-jeom (High score)


-์•„์•ผ/์–ด์•ผ ํ•˜๋‹ค | -a-ya/eo-ya ha-da (Must do)

-๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด(์„œ) | -gi wi-hae(-seo) (In order to)

๊ณ ๋“์ ์„ ๋ฐ›๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด์„œ ์ „๋žต์ ์œผ๋กœ ๊ณต๋ถ€ํ•ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. (In order to get a high score, you must study strategically.)

1 ์••๋„์ ์ธ ๋ฐฐ์  ๊ตฌ์กฐ | Overwhelming Scoring Distribution

TOPIK II ์“ฐ๊ธฐ 100์  ์ค‘ 54๋ฒˆ ๋…ผ์ˆ  ํ•˜๋‚˜๊ฐ€ 50์ ์œผ๋กœ **์ ˆ๋ฐ˜**์„ ๊ฒฐ์ •ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. (**2023 ๋ฐ์ดํ„ฐ ๊ธฐ๋ฐ˜**) 54๋ฒˆ ๋…ผ์ˆ ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์ฒ ์ €ํ•œ ๋Œ€๋น„๊ฐ€ ์“ฐ๊ธฐ ๊ณ ๋“์ ์˜ ํ•ต์‹ฌ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

Q54 Essay is worth **50 points** (out of 100), determining **half** of the score (**2023 data**). Thorough preparation for the Q54 essay is key to a high writing score.

2 ๋ฌธ์ œ ์œ ํ˜• ๋ฐ ๋ฐฐ์  ์ƒ์„ธ | Detailed Question Types & Points

์ด 4๊ฐœ ๋ฌธํ•ญ: 51-52๋ฒˆ: ๋นˆ์นธ ์ฑ„์šฐ๊ธฐ (๊ฐ 10์ , ์ด 20์ ), 53๋ฒˆ: ์ž๋ฃŒ ์„ค๋ช… (30์ ), 54๋ฒˆ: ๋…ผ์ˆ  (50์ ).

4 question types: **Q51-52:** **Fill-in-the-blank** (**20 points** total), **Q53:** **Data interpretation** (**30 points**), **Q54:** **Essay** (**50 points**).

3 ์ถ”์ฒœ ์‹œ๊ฐ„ ๋ฐฐ๋ถ„ | Recommended Time Allocation (์ด 50๋ถ„)

51-52๋ฒˆ: ์ด 10๋ถ„ (๋ชฉํ‘œ: 3๋ถ„ ์ด๋‚ด), 53๋ฒˆ: 15๋ถ„, 54๋ฒˆ: 25๋ถ„. 51-52๋ฒˆ์„ ๋นจ๋ฆฌ ํ•ด๊ฒฐํ•˜์—ฌ **54๋ฒˆ**์— **30๋ถ„ ์ด์ƒ**์„ ํ™•๋ณดํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ข‹์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

Allocate time: **Q51-52:** **10 mins** (Target: **under 3 mins**!), **Q53:** **15 mins**, **Q54:** **25 mins**. Solving Q51-52 fast secures **over 30 mins** for Q54.

๐Ÿ”—TOPIK ์“ฐ๊ธฐ ์‹ค๋ ฅ์„ ํ–ฅ์ƒ์‹œํ‚ค๊ณ  ์‹ถ๋‚˜์š”? (TOPIK Writing Skill)
4 ํ•„์ˆ˜ ๋ถ„๋Ÿ‰ ์š”๊ฑด ๋ฐ ๊ฐ์  ์ฃผ์˜ | Length Requirements & Penalty Warning

ํ•„์ˆ˜ ๊ธ€์ž ์ˆ˜: 53๋ฒˆ: 200-300์ž, 54๋ฒˆ: 600-700์ž. 2023๋…„ ๋ฐ์ดํ„ฐ ๊ธฐ์ค€, 54๋ฒˆ ์‘์‹œ์ž์˜ 72%๊ฐ€ ๊ธ€์ž ์ˆ˜ ๋ฏธ๋‹ฌ(ํ‰๊ท  520์ž)๋กœ ๊ฐ์ ๋˜์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์š”๊ตฌ ๋ถ„๋Ÿ‰ ์ค€์ˆ˜๊ฐ€ **๋งค์šฐ ์ค‘์š”**ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

Required length: **Q53**: **200-300 chars**, **Q54**: **600-700 chars**. **72% of Q54 takers were penalized for being under the count** (avg. 520 chars) in 2023. Meeting the length is crucial.

5 54๋ฒˆ ๋…ผ์ˆ  ์ฑ„์  ์š”์†Œ | Q54 Essay Scoring Factors

54๋ฒˆ ๋…ผ์ˆ ์€ **๋‚ด์šฉ ๋ฐ ๊ณผ์ œ ์ˆ˜ํ–‰(20์ ), ๋…ผ๋ฆฌ์  ๊ตฌ์กฐ(15์ ), ์–ดํœ˜ ๋ฐ ํ‘œํ˜„(8์ ), ๋ฌธ๋ฒ• ์ •ํ™•์„ฑ(7์ )**์œผ๋กœ ์ฑ„์ ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋…ผ๋ฆฌ์  ๊ตฌ์กฐ์™€ ๋‚ด์šฉ ์ ์ ˆ์„ฑ์ด **35์ **์„ ์ฐจ์ง€ํ•˜๋ฏ€๋กœ, ์ฃผ์ œ์— ๋งž๋Š” ์ผ๊ด€๋œ ๋…ผ๋ฆฌ๋ฅผ ํŽผ์น˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ํ•ต์‹ฌ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

Q54 Scoring is: **Content/Task (20 pts), Logical Structure (15 pts), Vocabulary/Expression (8 pts), Grammar Accuracy (7 pts)**. **Logical Structure and Content** account for **35 points**, making consistent logic crucial.

6 ์ฃผ์š” ๊ฐ์  ์š”์ธ | Main Deduction Factors

๊ฐ์  ์š”์ธ: 1. **๊ธ€์ž ์ˆ˜ ๋ฏธ๋‹ฌ**, 2. **๋งž์ถค๋ฒ•/๋„์–ด์“ฐ๊ธฐ ์˜ค๋ฅ˜**, 3. **๋ฐ˜๋ณต์ ์ธ ์–ดํœ˜/๋ฌธ๋ฒ• ์‚ฌ์šฉ** (๊ณ ๊ธ‰ ํ‘œํ˜„ ๋ถ€์กฑ), 4. **์ฃผ์ œ ์ดํƒˆ**.

Deduction factors: 1. **Under the word count**, 2. **Spelling/Spacing errors**, 3. **Repetitive vocabulary/grammar** (lack of advanced expression), 4. **Off-topic**.

๐Ÿ”—ํ•œ๊ตญ์–ด ๋งž์ถค๋ฒ• ๋ฐ ๋„์–ด์“ฐ๊ธฐ ์˜ค๋ฅ˜๋ฅผ ์ค„์ด๋Š” 5๊ฐ€์ง€ ํŒ (Korean Spelling Tips)
7 53๋ฒˆ: ์ž๋ฃŒ ์„ค๋ช…์˜ ๊ตฌ์กฐ | Q53: Data Interpretation Structure

53๋ฒˆ์€ **(1) ๋„์ž… (์กฐ์‚ฌ ๊ฐœ์š”), (2) ๋ณธ๋ก  (๊ฒฐ๊ณผ ๋ถ„์„), (3) ๊ฒฐ๋ก  (์˜ˆ์ธก ๋˜๋Š” ์ œ์–ธ)**์˜ 3๋‹จ๊ณ„๋กœ ๊ตฌ์„ฑํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ํ‘œ์ค€์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์กฐ์‚ฌ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฅผ **'~์— ๋”ฐ๋ฅด๋ฉด', '~์„/๋ฅผ ๋ฐ”ํƒ•์œผ๋กœ'** ๋“ฑ์˜ ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ ํ‘œํ˜„์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์—ฌ ๋…ผ๋ฆฌ์ ์œผ๋กœ ์„œ์ˆ ํ•ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

Q53 standard structure: **(1) Introduction (Survey overview), (2) Body (Result analysis), (3) Conclusion (Prediction or Suggestion)**. Use linking phrases like **'~์— ๋”ฐ๋ฅด๋ฉด' (according to)** to logically describe **survey results**.

8 ๊ณ ๊ธ‰ ๋ฌธ๋ฒ• ๋ฐ ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด ์‚ฌ์šฉ | Use of Advanced Grammar & Connectors

๋‹จ์ˆœ ๋‚˜์—ด ๋Œ€์‹  **'-์€/๋Š” ๋ฐ˜๋ฉด์—', '-์„/๋ฅผ ๋น„๋กฏํ•˜์—ฌ', '-์— ๊ธฐ์—ฌํ•˜๋‹ค', '-์„/๋ฅผ ์ดˆ๋ž˜ํ•˜๋‹ค'** ๋“ฑ **๊ณ ๊ธ‰ ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ ํ‘œํ˜„**์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ด์•ผ ์–ดํœ˜ ๋ฐ ํ‘œํ˜„ ์ ์ˆ˜๋ฅผ ๋†’์ผ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

Use **advanced connectors** like **'-์€/๋Š” ๋ฐ˜๋ฉด์—' (on the other hand)**, **'-์„/๋ฅผ ๋น„๋กฏํ•˜์—ฌ' (including)**, **'-์— ๊ธฐ์—ฌํ•˜๋‹ค' (contribute to)**, **'-์„/๋ฅผ ์ดˆ๋ž˜ํ•˜๋‹ค' (cause)** to raise the **Vocabulary/Expression** score.

๐Ÿ”—TOPIK 6๊ธ‰์„ ์œ„ํ•œ ํ•„์ˆ˜ ๊ณ ๊ธ‰ ๋ฌธ๋ฒ• 10๊ฐ€์ง€ (Advanced TOPIK Grammar)
9 ๊ฐœ์š” ์ž‘์„ฑ์˜ ์ค‘์š”์„ฑ | Importance of Outlining (54๋ฒˆ)

54๋ฒˆ ๋…ผ์ˆ  ์‹œ์ž‘ ์ „, **5๋ถ„** ์ด๋‚ด๋กœ **์„œ๋ก (์ฃผ์ œ ์ œ์‹œ), ๋ณธ๋ก  1(์ฃผ์ œ 1), ๋ณธ๋ก  2(์ฃผ์ œ 2), ๊ฒฐ๋ก (์š”์•ฝ ๋ฐ ์ œ์–ธ)**์˜ 4๋‹จ๋ฝ ๊ตฌ์กฐ๋กœ **๊ฐœ์š”**๋ฅผ ๋ฐ˜๋“œ์‹œ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•ด์•ผ ๋…ผ๋ฆฌ์  ๊ตฌ์กฐ ์ ์ˆ˜๋ฅผ ํ™•๋ณดํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

Before starting the Q54 essay, spend **5 minutes** to create an **outline** with a 4-paragraph structure: **Introduction (Topic), Body 1 (Idea 1), Body 2 (Idea 2), Conclusion (Summary & Suggestion)**. This secures points for **Logical Structure**.

10 ์ถœ์ œ ๊ฒฝํ–ฅ: ์‚ฌํšŒ ๋ฌธ์ œ์™€ ํ•ด๊ฒฐ์ฑ… | Trend: Social Issues & Solutions

์ตœ๊ทผ 54๋ฒˆ ๋…ผ์ˆ  ์ฃผ์ œ๋Š” **ํ™˜๊ฒฝ, ๊ต์œก, ๊ธฐ์ˆ  ๋ฐœ์ „, ์‚ฌํšŒ ์œค๋ฆฌ ๋ฌธ์ œ** ๋“ฑ **์‚ฌํšŒ์  ์ด์Šˆ์™€ ๊ทธ ํ•ด๊ฒฐ์ฑ…**์„ ๋ฌป๋Š” ์œ ํ˜•์ด ์ฃผ๋ฅผ ์ด๋ฃน๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‹ค์–‘ํ•œ ์‹œ์‚ฌ ์ฃผ์ œ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด **์ฐฌ๋ฐ˜ ๋…ผ๋ฆฌ**๋ฅผ ๋ฏธ๋ฆฌ ์ •๋ฆฌํ•ด ๋‘๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ํšจ์œจ์ ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

Recent Q54 essay topics focus on **social issues and solutions** (e.g., **Environment, Education, Technology, Social Ethics**). It is efficient to pre-organize **pros and cons arguments** for various current affairs topics.

✨ ์ถ”์ฒœ ํ•™์Šต: ๊ธฐ์ถœ๋ฌธ์ œ์˜ ์ฃผ์ œ์–ด๋ฅผ ์ค‘์‹ฌ์œผ๋กœ ๊ณ ๊ธ‰ ์–ดํœ˜์™€ ๋…ผ๋ฆฌ์ ์ธ ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด๋ฅผ ์ •๋ฆฌํ•˜๊ณ , ํ•ด๋‹น ์ฃผ์ œ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ **๋ฐ˜๋“œ์‹œ ๋‘ ๋ฌธ๋‹จ ์ด์ƒ์˜ ๋…ผ๋ฆฌ**๋ฅผ ์ค€๋น„ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

✨ Recommended Study: Focus on past topics, organize advanced vocabulary and logical connectors, and prepare **at least two paragraphs of logical arguments** per topic.



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