πŸ–‹️THE KEY OF KOREAN DREAM⑥ : Top 10 Essential Data-Driven Insights for the TOPIK Writing Section

TOPIK μ“°κΈ° μ˜μ—­: 합격을 μœ„ν•œ 핡심 데이터 10κ°€μ§€ μ „λž΅ | TOPIK Writing: 10 Key Data Points for Success Strategy

TOPIK Writing: 10 Key Data Points for Success Strategy

μ“°κΈ°μ˜μ—­ TOPIK

μ•ˆλ…•ν•˜μ„Έμš”! TOPIK II μ“°κΈ° μ˜μ—­μ€ 전체 μ‹œν—˜ 점수의 33.3% (100점)λ₯Ό μ°¨μ§€ν•˜λŠ” 맀우 μ€‘μš”ν•œ λΆ€λΆ„μž…λ‹ˆλ‹€. λ§Žμ€ ν•™μŠ΅μžλ“€μ΄ 어렀움을 λŠλΌμ§€λ§Œ, μ“°κΈ° μ˜μ—­μ˜ ꡬ쑰와 채점 방식을 μ •ν™•νžˆ μ΄ν•΄ν•˜κ³  μ „λž΅μ μœΌλ‘œ μ ‘κ·Όν•œλ‹€λ©΄ μΆ©λΆ„νžˆ 고득점을 얻을 수 μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.

이 κΈ€μ—μ„œλŠ” TOPIK 곡식 채점 νŒ¨ν„΄ 및 μ‹œν—˜κ΄€ λ³΄κ³ μ„œλ₯Ό 기반으둜, μ—¬λŸ¬λΆ„μ΄ μ“°κΈ° μ‹œν—˜μ„ 효과적으둜 μ€€λΉ„ν•˜κ³  λͺ©ν‘œ 점수λ₯Ό λ‹¬μ„±ν•˜λŠ” 데 κΌ­ ν•„μš”ν•œ 핡심 데이터 10κ°€μ§€λ₯Ό μ—„μ„ ν•˜μ—¬ μ•Œλ €λ“œλ¦½λ‹ˆλ‹€.

Hello! The TOPIK II Writing section is a very important part, accounting for 33.3% (100 points) of the total exam score. Many learners find it challenging, but with a thorough understanding of its structure and scoring and a strategic approach, achieving a high score is definitely possible.

Based on official TOPIK scoring patterns and examiner reports, this post provides 10 carefully selected key data points essential for effectively preparing for the Writing section and achieving your target score.


🎯 TOPIK μ“°κΈ°, μ΄κ²ƒλ§Œμ€ κΌ­ μ•Œμ•„λ‘μž! 핡심 데이터 10

🎯 TOPIK μ“°κΈ°, μ΄κ²ƒλ§Œμ€ κΌ­ μ•Œμ•„λ‘μž! 핡심 데이터 10

🎯 TOPIK Writing, Don't Miss These! 10 Key Data Points

1 압도적인 배점 ꡬ쑰 | Overwhelming Scoring Distribution

* TOPIK II 전체 300점 쀑 μ“°κΈ°λŠ” 100점을 μ°¨μ§€ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€.

* 특히, 54번 문제 ν•˜λ‚˜κ°€ 50점으둜 전체 μ“°κΈ° 점수의 μ ˆλ°˜μ„ κ²°μ •ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€. (2023 데이터 κΈ°μ€€)

* The Writing section accounts for 100 points out of a total of 300 points in TOPIK II.

* Crucially, Question 54 alone is worth 50 points, determining half of the total writing score. (Based on 2023 data)

배점 | Baetjeom | Scoring distribution
λ…Όμˆ  | Nonsul | Essay
고득점 | Godeukjeom | High score

πŸ’‘ μ „λž΅ 포인트: 54번 λ…Όμˆ  λ¬Έμ œμ— λŒ€ν•œ μ² μ €ν•œ λŒ€λΉ„κ°€ μ“°κΈ° κ³ λ“μ μ˜ ν•΅μ‹¬μž…λ‹ˆλ‹€.

πŸ’‘ Strategy Point: Thorough preparation for the Q54 essay is key to a high writing score.

2 문제 μœ ν˜• 및 배점 상세 | Detailed Question Types & Points

총 4개 λ¬Έν•­μ˜ μœ ν˜•κ³Ό 배점은 λ‹€μŒκ³Ό κ°™μŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.

  • 51-52번: 빈칸 μ±„μš°κΈ° (각 10점, 총 20점)
  • 53번: 자료 μ„€λͺ… ( 30점)
  • 54번: λ…Όμˆ  ( 50점)

The types and points for the total of 4 questions are as follows:

  • Q51-52: Fill-in-the-blank (10 points each, 20 points total)
  • Q53: Data interpretation (30 points)
  • Q54: Essay (50 points)
빈칸 μ±„μš°κΈ° | Binkan Chaegi | Fill-in-the-blank
자료 μ„€λͺ… | Jaryo Seolmyeong | Data description/interpretation
λ…Όμˆ  | Nonsul | Essay
3 μΆ”μ²œ μ‹œκ°„ λ°°λΆ„ | Recommended Time Allocation

총 50λΆ„μ˜ μ‹œν—˜ μ‹œκ°„μ€ μ΄λ ‡κ²Œ λ°°λΆ„ν•˜λŠ” 것이 νš¨μœ¨μ μž…λ‹ˆλ‹€.

  • 51-52번: 각 5λΆ„ (총 10λΆ„) - πŸ’‘ λͺ©ν‘œλŠ” 3λΆ„ 이내!
  • 53번: 15λΆ„
  • 54번: 25λΆ„

This is an efficient way to allocate the total 50 minutes of exam time:

  • Q51-52: 5 minutes each (10 minutes total) - πŸ’‘ Target under 3 mins!
  • Q53: 15 minutes
  • Q54: 25 minutes
μ‹œκ°„ λ°°λΆ„ | Sigan baebun | Time allocation
효율적 | Hyoyuljeok | Efficient
ν™•λ³΄ν•˜λ‹€ | Hwakbohada | To secure

⏱ μ‹œκ°„ ν™œμš© 팁: 51-52번 문제λ₯Ό 3λΆ„ 이내에 ν•΄κ²°ν•˜λ©΄, κ°€μž₯ 배점이 높은 54번 λ¬Έμ œμ— 30λΆ„ μ΄μƒμ˜ μ‹œκ°„μ„ 확보할 수 μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.

⏱ Time Usage Tip: If you solve Q51-52 within 3 minutes, you can secure over 30 minutes for the highest-scoring Q54.

4 ν•„μˆ˜ λΆ„λŸ‰ μš”κ±΄ | Essential Length Requirements

각 λ¬Έμ œλ³„λ‘œ μš”κ΅¬λ˜κ±°λ‚˜ ꢌμž₯λ˜λŠ” κΈ€μž 수λ₯Ό λ°˜λ“œμ‹œ μ§€μΌœμ•Ό ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€.

  • 53번: 200-300자 (λ‹΅μ•ˆ 곡간 μ œμ•½μ— λ§žμΆ”μ–΄)
  • 54번: 600-700자 (λͺ…μ‹œμ  μš”κ΅¬ 사항)

You must adhere to the required or recommended character count for each question:

  • Q53: 200-300 characters (to fit within the answer space limit)
  • Q54: 600-700 characters (explicit requirement)
λΆ„λŸ‰ μš”κ±΄ | Bunryang Yokgeon | Length requirements
κΈ€μž 수 | Geulja su | Character count
미달 | Midal | Under the required amount

🚨 μ€‘μš” κ²½κ³ : 2023λ…„ 데이터 κΈ°μ€€, 54번 μ‘μ‹œμžμ˜ 72%κ°€ κΈ€μž 수 미달 (평균 520자)둜 κ°μ λ˜μ—ˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€. μš”κ΅¬ λΆ„λŸ‰μ„ μ±„μš°λŠ” 것이 맀우 μ€‘μš”ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€.

🚨 Important Warning: Based on 2023 data, 72% of Q54 test-takers were penalized for being under the character count (average 520 chars). Meeting the required length is crucial.

5 54번 λ…Όμˆ  채점 μš”μ†Œ | Q54 Essay Scoring Factors

54번 λ…Όμˆ μ€ λ‹€μŒ λ„€ κ°€μ§€ μš”μ†Œλ₯Ό μ€‘μ‹¬μœΌλ‘œ ν‰κ°€λ˜λ©°, 각 μš”μ†Œμ˜ κ°€μ€‘μΉ˜κ°€ λ‹€λ¦…λ‹ˆλ‹€.

  • λ‚΄μš© μ μ ˆμ„±: 30%
  • 논리적 ꡬ쑰: 25%
  • μ–΄νœ˜ μ‚¬μš©: 20%
  • 문법 μ •ν™•μ„±: 25%

The Q54 essay is evaluated based on the following four factors, each with a different weighting:

  • Content relevance: 30%
  • Logical structure: 25%
  • Vocabulary usage: 20%
  • Grammar accuracy: 25%
채점 μš”μ†Œ | Chaejeom Yoso | Scoring factors
κ°€μ€‘μΉ˜ | Gajungchi | Weighting
λ‚΄μš© μ μ ˆμ„± | Naeyong Jeokjeolsseong | Content relevance
논리적 ꡬ쑰 | Nonrijeok Gujo | Logical structure
μ–΄νœ˜ μ‚¬μš© | Eohwi Sayong | Vocabulary usage
문법 μ •ν™•μ„± | Munbeop Jeonghwakseong | Grammar accuracy
6 2023λ…„ μ£Όμš” 감점 μš”μΈ | Major Deduction Factors in 2023

μ΅œμ‹  채점 λ³΄κ³ μ„œμ— λ”°λ₯΄λ©΄, ν•™μŠ΅μžλ“€μ΄ κ°€μž₯ 많이 μ‹€μˆ˜ν•˜λŠ” 뢀뢄은 λ‹€μŒκ³Ό κ°™μŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.

  • 54번: κΈ€μž 수 미달 (72%) (평균 520자)
  • 53번: 자료 μ˜€ν•΄ (61%)
  • 52번: μ—°κ²° μ–΄λ―Έ 였용 (55%)

According to the latest scoring report, the areas where learners make the most mistakes are as follows:

  • Q54: Under character count (72%) (avg. 520 chars)
  • Q53: Misinterpreting data (61%)
  • Q52: Misusing connecting endings (55%)
감점 μš”μΈ | Gamjeom Yoin | Deduction factors
채점 λ³΄κ³ μ„œ | Chaejeom Bogoseo | Scoring report
자료 μ˜€ν•΄ | Jaryo Ohae | Misinterpreting data
μ—°κ²° μ–΄λ―Έ 였용 | Yeon-gyeol eomi oyong | Misusing connecting endings
7 채점 κ²½ν–₯ νŒŒμ•… | Understanding Scoring Trends

점수 μƒμŠΉ/ν•˜λ½μ— 영ν–₯을 λ―ΈμΉ˜λŠ” μ£Όμš” μš”μΈλ“€μž…λ‹ˆλ‹€.

  • ⬆️ 가점 μš”μΈ: κ³ κΈ‰ μ–΄νœ˜ 및 λ¬Έλ²•μ˜ μžμ—°μŠ€λŸ¬μš΄ μ‚¬μš©
  • ⬇️ 감점 μš”μΈ: 반볡적인 였λ₯˜ λ°œμƒ μ‹œ 감점 폭 ν™•λŒ€
  • 🚫 ν”Όν•΄μ•Ό ν•  것: ν…œν”Œλ¦Ώμ΄λ‚˜ μ•”κΈ° λ¬Έμž₯의 λΆ€μžμ—°μŠ€λŸ¬μš΄ μ‚¬μš© (감점 μš”μΈ)

These are the key factors influencing score increase/decrease:

  • ⬆️ Bonus Factor: Natural use of advanced vocabulary and grammar
  • ⬇️ Deduction Factor: Increased penalty for repeated errors
  • 🚫 What to Avoid: Unnatural use of templates or memorized sentences (Deduction factor)
가점 μš”μΈ | Gajeom Yoin | Bonus factors
감점 μš”μΈ | Gamjeom Yoin | Deduction factors
ν…œν”Œλ¦Ώ | Templit | Template
μ•”κΈ° λ¬Έμž₯ | Amgi munjang | Memorized sentences
8 ꡭ가별 평균 점수 데이터 (TOPIK II) | Average Scores by Country (TOPIK II)
TOPIK II ꡭ가별 평균 합격 점수 (μ“°κΈ° μ˜μ—­) - 2023λ…„ 데이터
νƒœκ΅­ | Thailand
82점
λ² νŠΈλ‚¨ | Vietnam
76점
λͺ½κ³¨ | Mongolia
72점
쀑ꡭ | China
65점
λ―Έκ΅­ | USA
48점
유럽 평균 | EU Average
44점

* λ³Έ κ·Έλž˜ν”„λŠ” TOPIK 곡식 톡계 자료λ₯Ό 기반으둜 μž‘μ„±λœ κ°€μƒμ˜ λ°μ΄ν„°μž…λ‹ˆλ‹€. μ‹€μ œ μ‹œν—˜ κ²°κ³Όμ™€λŠ” 차이가 μžˆμ„ 수 μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.

* This graph is based on hypothetical data derived from official TOPIK statistics. Actual test results may vary.

πŸ’‘ μΆ”μ²œ: λ² νŠΈλ‚¨, νƒœκ΅­, λͺ½κ³¨ ν•™μŠ΅μžλ“€μ€ 54번 λ…Όμˆ μ— λŒ€ν•œ λŒ€λΉ„κ°€ 특히 잘 λ˜μ–΄ μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€. 이듀 κ΅­κ°€μ˜ ν•™μŠ΅ μžλ£Œμ™€ μ „λž΅μ„ μ°Έκ³ ν•˜μ—¬ ν•œκ΅­ 취업에 ν•„μš”ν•œ μ“°κΈ° λŠ₯λ ₯을 κ°•ν™”ν•˜μ„Έμš”.

πŸ’‘ Recommendation: Learners from Vietnam, Thailand, and Mongolia are particularly well-prepared for the Q54 essay. Consider their study materials and strategies to strengthen the writing skills needed for employment in Korea.

9 κ³ κΈ‰ 문법 및 ν‘œν˜„ ν™œμš© | Using Advanced Grammar & Expressions

κ³ κΈ‰ 문법을 μžμ—°μŠ€λŸ½κ²Œ μ‚¬μš©ν•˜λ©΄ 높은 점수λ₯Ό 얻을 수 μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€. μ‹œν—˜κ΄€λ“€μ΄ μ„ ν˜Έν•˜λŠ” ν‘œν˜„λ“€μ€ λ‹€μŒκ³Ό κ°™μŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.

  • ~을/λ₯Ό 톡해: (~을/λ₯Ό μ΄μš©ν•˜μ—¬)
  • ~에 따라: (~을 κΈ°μ€€μœΌλ‘œ, ~에 μ˜ν•˜λ©΄)
  • ~뿐만 μ•„λ‹ˆλΌ ~도: (λ˜ν•œ, λ”λΆˆμ–΄)
  • ~은/λŠ” 반면: (λŒ€μ‘°μ μœΌλ‘œ)
  • ~을/λ₯Ό λΉ„λ‘―ν•˜μ—¬: (ν¬ν•¨ν•˜μ—¬, ν•¨κ»˜)

Natural use of advanced grammar can lead to a high score. Expressions preferred by examiners include the following:

  • ~을/λ₯Ό 톡해 (eul/reul tonghae): (by means of, through)
  • ~에 따라 (e ttara): (according to, based on)
  • ~뿐만 μ•„λ‹ˆλΌ ~도 (ppunman anira do): (not only... but also)
  • ~은/λŠ” 반면 (eun/neun banmyeon): (in contrast)
  • ~을/λ₯Ό λΉ„λ‘―ν•˜μ—¬ (eul/reul birothaeyeo): (including, along with)
10 TOPIK μ“°κΈ° μ‹œν—˜, 'λΉ„μ¦ˆλ‹ˆμŠ€ ν•œκ΅­μ–΄'와 μ—°κ²°ν•˜κΈ° | Connecting TOPIK Writing to 'Business Korean'

TOPIK μ“°κΈ° μ˜μ—­μ—μ„œ μš”κ΅¬λ˜λŠ” 논리적이고 체계적인 κΈ€μ“°κΈ° λŠ₯λ ₯은 ν•œκ΅­μ—μ„œμ˜ μ·¨μ—…κ³Ό μ§κ²°λ˜λŠ” '리얼 λΉ„μ¦ˆλ‹ˆμŠ€ μ½”λ¦¬μ•ˆ' λŠ₯λ ₯κ³Ό 맀우 μœ μ‚¬ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€.

TOPIKμ—μ„œ 고득점을 받은 κ²½ν—˜μ€ ν•œκ΅­ κΈ°μ—…μ—μ„œ λ³΄κ³ μ„œ μž‘μ„±, 이메일 μ†Œν†΅, μ œμ•ˆμ„œ ꡬ성 λ“± μ‹€μ§ˆμ μΈ 업무 ν™˜κ²½μ— μ¦‰μ‹œ 적용될 수 μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.

The logical and systematic writing skills required in the TOPIK Writing section are very similar to the 'Real Business Korean' skills directly related to employment in Korea.

A high score on TOPIK can be immediately applied to practical work environments in Korean companies, such as writing reports, communicating via email, and structuring proposals.