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TOPIK II ์“ฐ๊ธฐ 54๋ฒˆ: ๊ธฐํ›„๋ณ€ํ™”์™€ ์ƒํ™œ ์† ์‹ค์ฒœ Writing Question 54: Climate Change and Daily Practice

TOPIK 54๋ฒˆ ์ •๋ณต! ํ•˜๋‚˜์”ฉ ๋”ฐ๋ผํ•ด๋ณด์„ธ์š” ๐Ÿ“
Conquer TOPIK 54! Follow along step-by-step

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์˜ˆ์ƒ๋ฌธ์ œ Previous exam questions

๋ฌธ์ œ: ์šฐ๋ฆฌ ์‚ฌํšŒ์—์„œ ๊ธฐํ›„๋ณ€ํ™”๊ฐ€ ์‹ฌ๊ฐํ•ด์ง€๋Š” ์›์ธ์€ ๋ฌด์—‡์ธ์ง€ ์„ค๋ช…ํ•˜๊ณ , ์ด ๋ฌธ์ œ๋ฅผ ํ•ด๊ฒฐํ•˜๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•œ ์ƒํ™œ ์† ์‹ค์ฒœ ๋ฐฉ์•ˆ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๋…ผ์ˆ ํ•˜์‹œ์˜ค.

Q : Explain the causes of deepening climate change in our society, and discuss the daily life practices to solve this problem.

๊ธฐํ›„๋ณ€ํ™”์˜ ์›์ธ (Causes of Climate Change)

๊ธฐํ›„๋ณ€ํ™”๋Š” ๋” ์ด์ƒ ์™ธ๋ฉดํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์—†๋Š” ์ „ ์ง€๊ตฌ์ ์ธ ๋ฌธ์ œ๊ฐ€ ๋˜์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด๋Ÿฌํ•œ ํ˜„์ƒ์˜ ๊ฐ€์žฅ ํฐ ์›์ธ์€ ๋ฐ”๋กœ '์ธ๊ฐ„์˜ ํ™œ๋™'์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์‚ฐ์—…ํ™” ์ดํ›„ ํ™”์„ ์—ฐ๋ฃŒ ์‚ฌ์šฉ์ด ๊ธ‰์ฆํ•˜๋ฉด์„œ ์ด์‚ฐํ™”ํƒ„์†Œ์™€ ๊ฐ™์€ ์˜จ์‹ค๊ฐ€์Šค ๋ฐฐ์ถœ๋Ÿ‰์ด ๊ธ‰๊ฒฉํžˆ ๋Š˜์–ด๋‚ฌ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด๋กœ ์ธํ•ด ์ง€๊ตฌ์˜ ํ‰๊ท  ๊ธฐ์˜จ์ด ์ƒ์Šนํ•˜๋Š” ์ง€๊ตฌ์˜จ๋‚œํ™”๊ฐ€ ๊ฐ€์†ํ™”๋˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋˜ํ•œ, ๋ฌด๋ถ„๋ณ„ํ•œ ์‚ผ๋ฆผ ๋ฒŒ์ฑ„์™€ ์ž์—ฐ ์ƒํƒœ๊ณ„ ํŒŒ๊ดด๋Š” ์ง€๊ตฌ์˜ ์ž์ • ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์„ ์•ฝํ™”์‹œ์ผœ ๊ธฐํ›„๋ณ€ํ™”์˜ ๋ฌธ์ œ๋ฅผ ๋”์šฑ ์‹ฌํ™”์‹œํ‚ค๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

Climate change has become a global issue that can no longer be ignored. The biggest cause of this phenomenon is 'human activity.' Since industrialization, the use of fossil fuels has skyrocketed, leading to a rapid increase in greenhouse gas emissions like carbon dioxide. This has accelerated global warming, which is causing the Earth's average temperature to rise. Furthermore, reckless deforestation and the destruction of natural ecosystems are weakening the planet's self-purification ability, further deepening the problem of climate change.

ํ•ด๊ฒฐ์„ ์œ„ํ•œ ์ƒํ™œ ์† ์‹ค์ฒœ (Daily Practices for Solutions)

์‹ฌ๊ฐํ•ด์ง€๋Š” ๊ธฐํ›„๋ณ€ํ™”์— ๋งž์„œ๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด์„œ๋Š” ๊ฑฐ์ฐฝํ•œ ์ •์ฑ…๋ฟ๋งŒ ์•„๋‹ˆ๋ผ, ์šฐ๋ฆฌ ๊ฐœ๊ฐœ์ธ์˜ ์ƒํ™œ ์† ์‹ค์ฒœ์ด ์ค‘์š”ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋จผ์ €, '์—๋„ˆ์ง€ ์ ˆ์•ฝ'์ด ๊ฐ€์žฅ ๊ธฐ๋ณธ์ ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๋Š” ์ „์ž๊ธฐ๊ธฐ์˜ ํ”Œ๋Ÿฌ๊ทธ๋ฅผ ๋ฝ‘๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ๋Œ€์ค‘๊ตํ†ต์„ ์ด์šฉํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๋งŒ์œผ๋กœ๋„ ํƒ„์†Œ ๋ฐฐ์ถœ๋Ÿ‰์„ ์ค„์ผ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‹ค์Œ์œผ๋กœ, '์ž์› ์ˆœํ™˜์„ ์œ„ํ•œ ๋…ธ๋ ฅ'์ด ํ•„์š”ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์žฌํ™œ์šฉ์„ ์ฒ ์ €ํžˆ ํ•˜๊ณ , ์ผํšŒ์šฉํ’ˆ ์‚ฌ์šฉ์„ ์ค„์ด๋ฉฐ, ํ…€๋ธ”๋Ÿฌ๋‚˜ ์žฅ๋ฐ”๊ตฌ๋‹ˆ๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋Š” ์Šต๊ด€์„ ๋“ค์ด๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ข‹์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด๋Ÿฌํ•œ ์ž‘์€ ์‹ค์ฒœ๋“ค์ด ๋ชจ์—ฌ ํฐ ๋ณ€ํ™”๋ฅผ ์ด๋Œ์–ด๋‚ผ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

To confront the worsening climate change, not only grand policies but also daily practices of each individual are important. First, 'energy conservation' is the most basic step. Simply unplugging electronic devices when not in use or using public transportation can reduce carbon emissions. Next, 'efforts for resource circulation' are needed. It is good to be thorough with recycling, reduce the use of disposable items, and get into the habit of using tumblers or reusable bags. These small practices can gather to bring about great change.

ํ•ต์‹ฌ ์–ดํœ˜ ๋ฐ ๋ฌธ๋ฒ• Core Vocabulary & Grammar

์–ดํœ˜ 1

์ „ ์ง€๊ตฌ์  (jeon-ji-gu-jeok)

๋ฐœ์Œ: (์ „์ง€๊ตฌ์ )
์˜๋ฏธ: ์ง€๊ตฌ ์ „์ฒด์— ๊ฑธ์นœ. ์ „ ์„ธ๊ณ„์ ์ธ. TOPIK 54๋ฒˆ์—์„œ๋Š” ์‚ฌํšŒ์  ๋˜๋Š” ํ™˜๊ฒฝ์  ๋ฌธ์ œ์˜ ์‹ฌ๊ฐ์„ฑ์„ ๊ฐ•์กฐํ•  ๋•Œ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๊ธฐ ์ข‹์€ ๊ณ ๊ธ‰ ํ‘œํ˜„์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์œ ์‚ฌ์–ด๋กœ๋Š” ‘์„ธ๊ณ„์ ’, ‘๊ตญ์ œ์ ’ ๋“ฑ์ด ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

(Spanning the entire globe; global. It's a high-level expression good for emphasizing the seriousness of social or environmental issues in TOPIK 54. Synonyms include 'worldwide' and 'international'.)

  • ํ™œ์šฉ ์˜ˆ์‹œ 1: ์ „ ์ง€๊ตฌ์ ์ธ ๊ธฐํ›„ ์œ„๊ธฐ์— ๊ณต๋™์œผ๋กœ ๋Œ€์ฒ˜ํ•ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
    (We must jointly address the global climate crisis.)
  • ํ™œ์šฉ ์˜ˆ์‹œ 2: ์ฝ”๋กœ๋‚˜19๋Š” ์ „ ์ง€๊ตฌ์ ์ธ ํŒฌ๋ฐ๋ฏน์„ ์ดˆ๋ž˜ํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
    (COVID-19 has caused a global pandemic.)
[๋‹ค์Œ ์–ดํœ˜๋กœ ์ด๋™]
์–ดํœ˜ 2

์ž์ • ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ (ja-jeong neung-ryeok)

๋ฐœ์Œ: (์ž์ •๋Šฅ๋ ฅ)
์˜๋ฏธ: ์Šค์Šค๋กœ ์˜ค์—ผ๋œ ๊ฒƒ์„ ๊นจ๋—ํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๋งŒ๋“œ๋Š” ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ. ํ™˜๊ฒฝ ๋ฌธ์ œ๋‚˜ ์‚ฌํšŒ ๋ฌธ์ œ ๋“ฑ์—์„œ ์‹œ์Šคํ…œ์ด ์Šค์Šค๋กœ ๋ฌธ์ œ๋ฅผ ํ•ด๊ฒฐํ•˜๋Š” ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์„ ์„ค๋ช…ํ•  ๋•Œ ์‚ฌ์šฉ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ฐ˜์˜์–ด๋Š” ์—†์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

(The ability to purify itself. It's used to describe a system's ability to solve problems on its own, such as in environmental or social issues. There are no direct antonyms.)

  • ํ™œ์šฉ ์˜ˆ์‹œ 1: ์ž์—ฐ์˜ ์ž์ • ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์„ ๋ฏฟ๊ณ  ํ™˜๊ฒฝ ๋ณดํ˜ธ์— ์†Œํ™€ํžˆ ํ•ด์„œ๋Š” ์•ˆ ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
    (We should not neglect environmental protection by trusting in nature's self-purification ability.)
  • ํ™œ์šฉ ์˜ˆ์‹œ 2: ์‚ฌํšŒ์˜ ์ž์ • ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์ด ์•ฝํ™”๋˜๋ฉด ๋ถ€์ •๋ถ€ํŒจ๊ฐ€ ๋งŒ์—ฐํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
    (If a society's self-purification ability weakens, corruption becomes rampant.)
[๋‹ค์Œ ์–ดํœ˜๋กœ ์ด๋™]
์–ดํœ˜ 3

์˜จ์‹ค๊ฐ€์Šค (on-sil-ga-seu)

๋ฐœ์Œ: (์˜จ์‹ค๊ฐ€์Šค)
์˜๋ฏธ: ์ง€๊ตฌ๋ฅผ ์˜จ์‹ค์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ๋ฅ๊ฒŒ ๋งŒ๋“œ๋Š” ๊ฐ€์Šค. ์ด์‚ฐํ™”ํƒ„์†Œ, ๋ฉ”ํƒ„ ๋“ฑ์ด ๋Œ€ํ‘œ์ ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

(Gases that trap heat in the atmosphere, like a greenhouse. Carbon dioxide and methane are typical examples.)

  • ํ™œ์šฉ ์˜ˆ์‹œ 1: ์˜จ์‹ค๊ฐ€์Šค ๋ฐฐ์ถœ๋Ÿ‰์„ ์ค„์ด๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด ๋…ธ๋ ฅํ•ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
    (We must strive to reduce greenhouse gas emissions.)
  • ํ™œ์šฉ ์˜ˆ์‹œ 2: ์˜จ์‹ค๊ฐ€์Šค๋Š” ์ง€๊ตฌ์˜จ๋‚œํ™”์˜ ์ฃผ์š” ์›์ธ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
    (Greenhouse gases are a main cause of global warming.)
[๋‹ค์Œ ๋ฌธ๋ฒ•์œผ๋กœ ์ด๋™]
๋ฌธ๋ฒ• 1

~์— ์ง๋ฉดํ•˜๋‹ค / ~์— ๋งž์„œ๋‹ค

์˜๋ฏธ: "~์— ๋งž์„œ๋‹ค, ~๋ฅผ ๋งˆ์ฃผํ•˜๋‹ค"๋ผ๋Š” ์˜๋ฏธ๋กœ, ์–ด๋ ค์šด ์ƒํ™ฉ์ด๋‚˜ ์œ„ํ˜‘์ ์ธ ๋ฌธ์ œ๋ฅผ ์„ค๋ช…ํ•  ๋•Œ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. TOPIK 54๋ฒˆ์—์„œ ๋ฌธ์ œ์ ์„ ์ œ์‹œํ•  ๋•Œ ํšจ๊ณผ์ ์ธ ํ‘œํ˜„์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

(Used to describe a difficult or threatening situation, meaning "to face" or "to confront." It's an effective expression for presenting problems in TOPIK 54.)

  • ํ™œ์šฉ ์˜ˆ์‹œ 1: ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ์‹œ๋Œ€์— ์ง๋ฉดํ•˜์—ฌ ๋งŽ์€ ๋„์ „์„ ๋ฐ›๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
    (We are facing many challenges in the face of a new era.)
  • ํ™œ์šฉ ์˜ˆ์‹œ 2: ๊ธฐํ›„๋ณ€ํ™”๋ผ๋Š” ์œ„๊ธฐ์— ๋งž์„œ๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด ๋ชจ๋‘์˜ ๋…ธ๋ ฅ์ด ํ•„์š”ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
    (Everyone's effort is needed to confront the crisis of climate change.)
[๋‹ค์Œ ๋ฌธ๋ฒ•์œผ๋กœ ์ด๋™]
๋ฌธ๋ฒ• 2

~์„ ์ดˆ๋ž˜ํ•˜๋‹ค / ~์„ ์ด๋Œ์–ด๋‚ด๋‹ค

์˜๋ฏธ: '์ดˆ๋ž˜ํ•˜๋‹ค'๋Š” ๋ถ€์ •์ ์ธ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฅผ, '์ด๋Œ์–ด๋‚ด๋‹ค'๋Š” ๊ธ์ •์ ์ธ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฅผ ๊ฐ€์ ธ์˜ฌ ๋•Œ ์‚ฌ์šฉ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์“ฐ๊ธฐ์—์„œ ์›์ธ๊ณผ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ ๊ด€๊ณ„๋ฅผ ๋ช…ํ™•ํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์„ค๋ช…ํ•  ๋•Œ ์œ ์šฉํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

('To bring about' or 'to cause.' '์ดˆ๋ž˜ํ•˜๋‹ค' is used for negative results, and '์ด๋Œ์–ด๋‚ด๋‹ค' is used for positive results. It's useful for clearly explaining cause-and-effect relationships in writing.)

  • ํ™œ์šฉ ์˜ˆ์‹œ 1: ๋ฌด๋ถ„๋ณ„ํ•œ ๊ฐœ๋ฐœ์€ ํ™˜๊ฒฝ ํŒŒ๊ดด๋ฅผ ์ดˆ๋ž˜ํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
    (Reckless development caused environmental destruction.)
  • ํ™œ์šฉ ์˜ˆ์‹œ 2: ์ž‘์€ ์‹ค์ฒœ์ด ํฐ ๋ณ€ํ™”๋ฅผ ์ด๋Œ์–ด๋‚ผ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
    (Small practices can bring about great change.)
[๋‹ค์Œ ๋ฌธ๋ฒ•์œผ๋กœ ์ด๋™]
๋ฌธ๋ฒ• 3

~์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๋…ผ์˜๊ฐ€ ํ•„์š”ํ•˜๋‹ค

์˜๋ฏธ: ํŠน์ • ๋ฌธ์ œ๋‚˜ ์ฃผ์ œ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๊นŠ์ด ์žˆ๋Š” ํ† ๋ก ์ด๋‚˜ ๊ณ ๋ฏผ์ด ํ•„์š”ํ•จ์„ ๋‚˜ํƒ€๋‚ด๋Š” ํ‘œํ˜„์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. TOPIK 54๋ฒˆ์—์„œ ๋…ผ์ˆ ์˜ ๊ฒฐ๋ก  ๋ถ€๋ถ„์— ์ž์ฃผ ํ™œ์šฉ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

(This expression indicates that in-depth discussion or consideration is needed on a specific issue or topic. It is often used in the conclusion of a TOPIK 54 essay.)

  • ํ™œ์šฉ ์˜ˆ์‹œ 1: ์ €์ถœ์‚ฐ ๋ฌธ์ œ ํ•ด๊ฒฐ์„ ์œ„ํ•œ ์‚ฌํšŒ์ ์ธ ๋…ผ์˜๊ฐ€ ํ•„์š”ํ•˜๋‹ค.
    (A social discussion is needed to solve the low birth rate problem.)
  • ํ™œ์šฉ ์˜ˆ์‹œ 2: ์ธ๊ณต์ง€๋Šฅ ์œค๋ฆฌ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๋…ผ์˜๊ฐ€ ์‹œ๊ธ‰ํ•˜๋‹ค.
    (The discussion on AI ethics is urgent.)
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