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30-Minute Business Korean๐Ÿค Day 29 ํ”ผ๋“œ๋ฐฑ ์ฃผ์‹œ๊ฒ ์–ด์š”?.' ์กฐ์–ธ์„ ๊ตฌํ•  ๋•Œ _ learn expressions for asking for feedback from colleagues or superiors

[์ธ๋ฑ์Šค ๋ณต๊ตฌ ์‹œ์Šคํ…œ ๊ฐ€๋™ ์ค‘] ๋ณธ ํฌ์ŠคํŠธ๋Š” HTTPS ์ ˆ๋Œ€ ๊ฒฝ๋กœ๋กœ ๋™๊ธฐํ™”๋˜์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
29์ผ์ฐจ: ํ”ผ๋“œ๋ฐฑ ์š”์ฒญ ๋ฐ ์ œ๊ณต | Day 29: Asking for and Giving Feedback

29์ผ์ฐจ: ํ”ผ๋“œ๋ฐฑ ์š”์ฒญ ๋ฐ ์ œ๊ณต
Day 29: Asking for and Giving Feedback

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์˜ค๋Š˜์€ ๋™๋ฃŒ๋‚˜ ์ƒ์‚ฌ์—๊ฒŒ ํ”ผ๋“œ๋ฐฑ์„ ์š”์ฒญํ•˜๊ณ , ์ƒ๋Œ€๋ฐฉ์—๊ฒŒ ์กฐ์–ธ์„ ์ค„ ๋•Œ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋Š” ํ‘œํ˜„๋“ค์„ ๋ฐฐ์›Œ๋ด…์‹œ๋‹ค.
Today, let's learn expressions for asking for feedback from colleagues or superiors and giving advice to others.

์—…๋ฌด์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐํ•˜๋Š” ๋‘ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ

์‚ฌ๋ฌด์‹ค์—์„œ ํ”„๋กœ์ ํŠธ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๋…ผ์˜ํ•˜๋Š” ๋‘ ๋ช…์˜ ๋น„์ฆˆ๋‹ˆ์Šค๋งจ [Two businessmen discussing a project in an office]

ํ•ต์‹ฌ ๋Œ€ํ™” | Key Dialogue

A: ๋ถ€์žฅ๋‹˜, ๋ฐฉ๊ธˆ ๋ฐœํ‘œํ•œ ๊ธฐํš์•ˆ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ํ”ผ๋“œ๋ฐฑ ์ข€ ์ฃผ์‹œ๊ฒ ์–ด์š”?

A: Manager, would you please give me some feedback on the proposal I just presented?

B: ๋„ค. ์ „์ฒด์ ์œผ๋กœ ์•„์ฃผ ์ข‹์•˜์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ๋ฐ ์‹œ์žฅ ๋ถ„์„ ์ž๋ฃŒ๋Š” ์กฐ๊ธˆ ๋” ๊ฐœ์„ ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ข‹๊ฒ ์–ด์š”.

B: Yes. Overall, it was very good. But it would be good to improve the market analysis data a little more.

A: ์•Œ๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์กฐ์–ธ ๊ฐ์‚ฌํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‹ค์Œ ๋ฐœํ‘œ ๋•Œ๋Š” ๋” ์ž˜ํ•˜๋„๋ก ํ•˜๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

A: Understood. Thank you for the advice. I will try to do better in the next presentation.

์–ดํœ˜ ๋ฐ ํ‘œํ˜„ ํ•™์Šต | Vocabulary & Expressions

ํ”ผ๋“œ๋ฐฑ (Feedback)

์–ด๋–ค ์ผ์˜ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๋ฐ˜์‘์ด๋‚˜ ์˜๊ฒฌ์„ ๋œปํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํŠนํžˆ ๊ฐœ์„ ์„ ์œ„ํ•œ ์˜๊ฒฌ์„ ๋งํ•  ๋•Œ ์ž์ฃผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

It means a reaction or opinion on the result of something. It is often used especially when giving opinions for improvement.

์˜ˆ๋ฌธ | Example

์ด๋ฒˆ ํ”„๋กœ์ ํŠธ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ํŒ€์›๋“ค์˜ ํ”ผ๋“œ๋ฐฑ์„ ๋“ฃ๊ณ  ์‹ถ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

I would like to hear the team members' feedback on this project.

์กฐ์–ธ (Advice)

์ƒ๋Œ€๋ฐฉ์ด ๋” ๋‚˜์€ ๋ฐฉํ–ฅ์œผ๋กœ ๋‚˜์•„๊ฐ€๋„๋ก ๋„์™€์ฃผ๋Š” ๋ง์ด๋‚˜ ์˜๊ฒฌ์„ ๋œปํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

It means words or opinions that help the other person move in a better direction.

์˜ˆ๋ฌธ | Example

์„ ๋ฐฐ๋‹˜์˜ ์กฐ์–ธ ๋•๋ถ„์— ์ข‹์€ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฅผ ์–ป์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

Thanks to my senior's advice, I was able to get good results.

๊ฐœ์„ ํ•˜๋‹ค (To improve/make better)

๋ถ€์กฑํ•˜๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ์ž˜๋ชป๋œ ์ ์„ ๊ณ ์ณ ๋” ์ข‹๊ฒŒ ๋งŒ๋“œ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ์˜๋ฏธํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

It means to fix something that is lacking or wrong to make it better.

์˜ˆ๋ฌธ | Example

๊ณ ๊ฐ์˜ ์š”๊ตฌ์‚ฌํ•ญ์„ ๋ฐ˜์˜ํ•˜์—ฌ ์„œ๋น„์Šค๋ฅผ ๊ฐœ์„ ํ•˜๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

We will improve the service by reflecting the customer's requirements.

๋ฌธ๋ฒ• ํ•™์Šต | Grammar Study

-์•„/์–ด ์ฃผ์‹œ๊ฒ ์–ด์š”? (Would you please...?)

์ƒ๋Œ€๋ฐฉ์—๊ฒŒ ์ •์ค‘ํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์–ด๋–ค ํ–‰๋™์„ ํ•ด๋‹ฌ๋ผ๊ณ  ๋ถ€ํƒํ•  ๋•Œ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

Used when politely asking someone to do something for you.

์˜ˆ๋ฌธ | Example

์ด ์„œ๋ฅ˜ ์ข€ ํ™•์ธํ•ด ์ฃผ์‹œ๊ฒ ์–ด์š”?

Would you please check this document?

-๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ข‹๊ฒ ๋‹ค (It would be good to...)

์ƒ๋Œ€๋ฐฉ์—๊ฒŒ ๋ถ€๋“œ๋Ÿฝ๊ฒŒ ์ œ์•ˆ์ด๋‚˜ ์กฐ์–ธ์„ ํ•  ๋•Œ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

Used to gently make a suggestion or give advice to someone.

์˜ˆ๋ฌธ | Example

์ด ๋ถ€๋ถ„์€ ๋‹ค์‹œ ํ•œ๋ฒˆ ๊ฒ€ํ† ํ•ด ๋ณด๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ข‹๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

It would be good to review this part one more time.

-๋„๋ก ํ•˜๋‹ค (To try to/make sure to...)

์–ด๋–ค ๋ชฉํ‘œ๋‚˜ ์ƒํƒœ๋ฅผ ์œ„ํ•ด ๋…ธ๋ ฅํ•˜๊ฑฐ๋‚˜, ์˜์ง€๋ฅผ ํ‘œํ˜„ํ•  ๋•Œ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

Used to express effort or determination towards a certain goal or state.

์˜ˆ๋ฌธ | Example

๋งˆ๊ฐ ๊ธฐํ•œ์„ ๋งž์ถ”๋„๋ก ํ•˜๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

I will make sure to meet the deadline.

์—ฐ์Šต๋ฌธ์ œ | Practice Problem

๋‹ค์Œ ๋นˆ์นธ์— ์•Œ๋งž์€ ๋‹จ์–ด๋‚˜ ํ‘œํ˜„์„ ๋„ฃ์–ด ๋ฌธ์žฅ์„ ์™„์„ฑํ•˜์„ธ์š”.
Complete the following sentence by filling in the blank with the correct word or expression.

A: ๋ถ€์žฅ๋‹˜, ์ œ๊ฐ€ ๋ฐœํ‘œํ•œ ๋‚ด์šฉ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด _________ (ํ”ผ๋“œ๋ฐฑ)์„ ์ข€ ์ฃผ์‹ค ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์„๊นŒ์š”?
A: Manager, could you please give me some _________ on my presentation? (feedback)

B: ๋„ค, ๋‹ค์Œ์—๋Š” ์ž๋ฃŒ์˜ ์‹œ๊ฐ์  ์š”์†Œ๋ฅผ _________ (๊ฐœ์„ ํ•˜๋‹ค)๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ข‹๊ฒ ์–ด์š”.
B: Yes, next time it would be good to _________ the visual elements of the material. (to improve)

์ •๋‹ต: ํ”ผ๋“œ๋ฐฑ / ๊ฐœ์„ ํ•˜๋Š”

Answer: ํ”ผ๋“œ๋ฐฑ / ๊ฐœ์„ ํ•˜๋Š”

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