30-Minute Business Korean🀝 Day 29 ν”Όλ“œλ°± μ£Όμ‹œκ² μ–΄μš”?.' 쑰언을 ꡬ할 λ•Œ _ learn expressions for asking for feedback from colleagues or superiors

29일차: ν”Όλ“œλ°± μš”μ²­ 및 제곡 | Day 29: Asking for and Giving Feedback

29일차: ν”Όλ“œλ°± μš”μ²­ 및 제곡
Day 29: Asking for and Giving Feedback

⭐ 30일 λΉ„μ¦ˆλ‹ˆμŠ€ ν•œκ΅­μ–΄: ν•˜λ£¨ 30λΆ„, ν•œκ΅­μ–΄ μ‹€λ ₯으둜 경쟁λ ₯을 λ†’μ—¬λ³΄μ„Έμš”!
⭐ 30-Day Business Korean: Just 30 minutes a day to boost your competitiveness with Korean skills!

μ˜€λŠ˜μ€ λ™λ£Œλ‚˜ μƒμ‚¬μ—κ²Œ ν”Όλ“œλ°±μ„ μš”μ²­ν•˜κ³ , μƒλŒ€λ°©μ—κ²Œ 쑰언을 쀄 λ•Œ μ‚¬μš©ν•˜λŠ” ν‘œν˜„λ“€μ„ λ°°μ›Œλ΄…μ‹œλ‹€.
Today, let's learn expressions for asking for feedback from colleagues or superiors and giving advice to others.

업무에 λŒ€ν•΄ μ΄μ•ΌκΈ°ν•˜λŠ” 두 μ‚¬λžŒ

μ‚¬λ¬΄μ‹€μ—μ„œ ν”„λ‘œμ νŠΈμ— λŒ€ν•΄ λ…Όμ˜ν•˜λŠ” 두 λͺ…μ˜ λΉ„μ¦ˆλ‹ˆμŠ€λ§¨ [Two businessmen discussing a project in an office]

핡심 λŒ€ν™” | Key Dialogue

A: λΆ€μž₯λ‹˜, 방금 λ°œν‘œν•œ κΈ°νšμ•ˆμ— λŒ€ν•΄ ν”Όλ“œλ°± μ’€ μ£Όμ‹œκ² μ–΄μš”?

A: Manager, would you please give me some feedback on the proposal I just presented?

B: λ„€. μ „μ²΄μ μœΌλ‘œ μ•„μ£Ό μ’‹μ•˜μŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€. 그런데 μ‹œμž₯ 뢄석 μžλ£ŒλŠ” 쑰금 더 κ°œμ„ ν•˜λŠ” 것이 μ’‹κ² μ–΄μš”.

B: Yes. Overall, it was very good. But it would be good to improve the market analysis data a little more.

A: μ•Œκ² μŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€. μ‘°μ–Έ κ°μ‚¬ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€. λ‹€μŒ λ°œν‘œ λ•ŒλŠ” 더 μž˜ν•˜λ„λ‘ ν•˜κ² μŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.

A: Understood. Thank you for the advice. I will try to do better in the next presentation.

μ–΄νœ˜ 및 ν‘œν˜„ ν•™μŠ΅ | Vocabulary & Expressions

ν”Όλ“œλ°± (Feedback)

μ–΄λ–€ 일의 결과에 λŒ€ν•œ λ°˜μ‘μ΄λ‚˜ μ˜κ²¬μ„ λœ»ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€. 특히 κ°œμ„ μ„ μœ„ν•œ μ˜κ²¬μ„ 말할 λ•Œ 자주 μ‚¬μš©ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€.

It means a reaction or opinion on the result of something. It is often used especially when giving opinions for improvement.

예문 | Example

이번 ν”„λ‘œμ νŠΈμ— λŒ€ν•œ νŒ€μ›λ“€μ˜ ν”Όλ“œλ°±μ„ λ“£κ³  μ‹ΆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.

I would like to hear the team members' feedback on this project.

μ‘°μ–Έ (Advice)

μƒλŒ€λ°©μ΄ 더 λ‚˜μ€ λ°©ν–₯으둜 λ‚˜μ•„κ°€λ„λ‘ λ„μ™€μ£ΌλŠ” λ§μ΄λ‚˜ μ˜κ²¬μ„ λœ»ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€.

It means words or opinions that help the other person move in a better direction.

예문 | Example

μ„ λ°°λ‹˜μ˜ μ‘°μ–Έ 덕뢄에 쒋은 κ²°κ³Όλ₯Ό 얻을 수 μžˆμ—ˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.

Thanks to my senior's advice, I was able to get good results.

κ°œμ„ ν•˜λ‹€ (To improve/make better)

λΆ€μ‘±ν•˜κ±°λ‚˜ 잘λͺ»λœ 점을 고쳐 더 μ’‹κ²Œ λ§Œλ“œλŠ” 것을 μ˜λ―Έν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€.

It means to fix something that is lacking or wrong to make it better.

예문 | Example

고객의 μš”κ΅¬μ‚¬ν•­μ„ λ°˜μ˜ν•˜μ—¬ μ„œλΉ„μŠ€λ₯Ό κ°œμ„ ν•˜κ² μŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.

We will improve the service by reflecting the customer's requirements.

문법 ν•™μŠ΅ | Grammar Study

-μ•„/μ–΄ μ£Όμ‹œκ² μ–΄μš”? (Would you please...?)

μƒλŒ€λ°©μ—κ²Œ μ •μ€‘ν•˜κ²Œ μ–΄λ–€ 행동을 해달라고 뢀탁할 λ•Œ μ‚¬μš©ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€.

Used when politely asking someone to do something for you.

예문 | Example

이 μ„œλ₯˜ μ’€ 확인해 μ£Όμ‹œκ² μ–΄μš”?

Would you please check this document?

-λŠ” 것이 μ’‹κ² λ‹€ (It would be good to...)

μƒλŒ€λ°©μ—κ²Œ λΆ€λ“œλŸ½κ²Œ μ œμ•ˆμ΄λ‚˜ 쑰언을 ν•  λ•Œ μ‚¬μš©ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€.

Used to gently make a suggestion or give advice to someone.

예문 | Example

이 뢀뢄은 λ‹€μ‹œ ν•œλ²ˆ κ²€ν† ν•΄ λ³΄λŠ” 것이 μ’‹κ² μŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.

It would be good to review this part one more time.

-도둝 ν•˜λ‹€ (To try to/make sure to...)

μ–΄λ–€ λͺ©ν‘œλ‚˜ μƒνƒœλ₯Ό μœ„ν•΄ λ…Έλ ₯ν•˜κ±°λ‚˜, μ˜μ§€λ₯Ό ν‘œν˜„ν•  λ•Œ μ‚¬μš©ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€.

Used to express effort or determination towards a certain goal or state.

예문 | Example

마감 κΈ°ν•œμ„ λ§žμΆ”λ„λ‘ ν•˜κ² μŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.

I will make sure to meet the deadline.

μ—°μŠ΅λ¬Έμ œ | Practice Problem

λ‹€μŒ λΉˆμΉΈμ— μ•Œλ§žμ€ λ‹¨μ–΄λ‚˜ ν‘œν˜„μ„ λ„£μ–΄ λ¬Έμž₯을 μ™„μ„±ν•˜μ„Έμš”.
Complete the following sentence by filling in the blank with the correct word or expression.

A: λΆ€μž₯λ‹˜, μ œκ°€ λ°œν‘œν•œ λ‚΄μš©μ— λŒ€ν•΄ _________ (ν”Όλ“œλ°±)을 μ’€ μ£Όμ‹€ 수 μžˆμ„κΉŒμš”?
A: Manager, could you please give me some _________ on my presentation? (feedback)

B: λ„€, λ‹€μŒμ—λŠ” 자료의 μ‹œκ°μ  μš”μ†Œλ₯Ό _________ (κ°œμ„ ν•˜λ‹€)λŠ” 것이 μ’‹κ² μ–΄μš”.
B: Yes, next time it would be good to _________ the visual elements of the material. (to improve)

μ •λ‹΅: ν”Όλ“œλ°± / κ°œμ„ ν•˜λŠ”

Answer: ν”Όλ“œλ°± / κ°œμ„ ν•˜λŠ”

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