30-Minute Business Koreanπ€ Day 29 νΌλλ°± μ£Όμκ² μ΄μ?.' μ‘°μΈμ ꡬν λ _ learn expressions for asking for feedback from colleagues or superiors
29μΌμ°¨: νΌλλ°± μμ² λ° μ 곡
Day 29: Asking for and Giving Feedback
⭐ 30μΌ λΉμ¦λμ€ νκ΅μ΄: ν루 30λΆ, νκ΅μ΄ μ€λ ₯μΌλ‘ κ²½μλ ₯μ λμ¬λ³΄μΈμ!
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μ€λμ λλ£λ μμ¬μκ² νΌλλ°±μ μμ²νκ³ , μλλ°©μκ² μ‘°μΈμ μ€ λ μ¬μ©νλ ννλ€μ λ°°μλ΄
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Today, let's learn expressions for asking for feedback from colleagues or superiors and giving advice to others.

μ¬λ¬΄μ€μμ νλ‘μ νΈμ λν΄ λ Όμνλ λ λͺ μ λΉμ¦λμ€λ§¨ [Two businessmen discussing a project in an office]
ν΅μ¬ λν | Key Dialogue
A: λΆμ₯λ, λ°©κΈ λ°νν κΈ°νμμ λν΄ νΌλλ°± μ’ μ£Όμκ² μ΄μ?
A: Manager, would you please give me some feedback on the proposal I just presented?
B: λ€. μ 체μ μΌλ‘ μμ£Ό μ’μμ΅λλ€. κ·Έλ°λ° μμ₯ λΆμ μλ£λ μ‘°κΈ λ κ°μ νλ κ²μ΄ μ’κ² μ΄μ.
B: Yes. Overall, it was very good. But it would be good to improve the market analysis data a little more.
A: μκ² μ΅λλ€. μ‘°μΈ κ°μ¬ν©λλ€. λ€μ λ°ν λλ λ μνλλ‘ νκ² μ΅λλ€.
A: Understood. Thank you for the advice. I will try to do better in the next presentation.
μ΄ν λ° νν νμ΅ | Vocabulary & Expressions
μ΄λ€ μΌμ κ²°κ³Όμ λν λ°μμ΄λ μ견μ λ»ν©λλ€. νΉν κ°μ μ μν μ견μ λ§ν λ μμ£Ό μ¬μ©ν©λλ€.
It means a reaction or opinion on the result of something. It is often used especially when giving opinions for improvement.
μλ¬Έ | Example
μ΄λ² νλ‘μ νΈμ λν νμλ€μ νΌλλ°±μ λ£κ³ μΆμ΅λλ€.
I would like to hear the team members' feedback on this project.
μλλ°©μ΄ λ λμ λ°©ν₯μΌλ‘ λμκ°λλ‘ λμμ£Όλ λ§μ΄λ μ견μ λ»ν©λλ€.
It means words or opinions that help the other person move in a better direction.
μλ¬Έ | Example
μ λ°°λμ μ‘°μΈ λλΆμ μ’μ κ²°κ³Όλ₯Ό μ»μ μ μμμ΅λλ€.
Thanks to my senior's advice, I was able to get good results.
λΆμ‘±νκ±°λ μλͺ»λ μ μ κ³ μ³ λ μ’κ² λ§λλ κ²μ μλ―Έν©λλ€.
It means to fix something that is lacking or wrong to make it better.
μλ¬Έ | Example
κ³ κ°μ μꡬμ¬νμ λ°μνμ¬ μλΉμ€λ₯Ό κ°μ νκ² μ΅λλ€.
We will improve the service by reflecting the customer's requirements.
λ¬Έλ² νμ΅ | Grammar Study
μλλ°©μκ² μ μ€νκ² μ΄λ€ νλμ ν΄λ¬λΌκ³ λΆνν λ μ¬μ©ν©λλ€.
Used when politely asking someone to do something for you.
μλ¬Έ | Example
μ΄ μλ₯ μ’ νμΈν΄ μ£Όμκ² μ΄μ?
Would you please check this document?
μλλ°©μκ² λΆλλ½κ² μ μμ΄λ μ‘°μΈμ ν λ μ¬μ©ν©λλ€.
Used to gently make a suggestion or give advice to someone.
μλ¬Έ | Example
μ΄ λΆλΆμ λ€μ νλ² κ²ν ν΄ λ³΄λ κ²μ΄ μ’κ² μ΅λλ€.
It would be good to review this part one more time.
μ΄λ€ λͺ©νλ μνλ₯Ό μν΄ λ Έλ ₯νκ±°λ, μμ§λ₯Ό ννν λ μ¬μ©ν©λλ€.
Used to express effort or determination towards a certain goal or state.
μλ¬Έ | Example
λ§κ° κΈ°νμ λ§μΆλλ‘ νκ² μ΅λλ€.
I will make sure to meet the deadline.
μ°μ΅λ¬Έμ | Practice Problem
λ€μ λΉμΉΈμ μλ§μ λ¨μ΄λ ννμ λ£μ΄ λ¬Έμ₯μ μμ±νμΈμ.
Complete the following sentence by filling in the blank with the correct word or expression.
A: λΆμ₯λ, μ κ° λ°νν λ΄μ©μ λν΄ _________ (νΌλλ°±)μ μ’ μ£Όμ€ μ μμκΉμ?
A: Manager, could you please give me some _________ on my presentation? (feedback)
B: λ€, λ€μμλ μλ£μ μκ°μ μμλ₯Ό _________ (κ°μ νλ€)λ κ²μ΄ μ’κ² μ΄μ.
B: Yes, next time it would be good to _________ the visual elements of the material. (to improve)
μ λ΅: νΌλλ°± / κ°μ νλ
Answer: νΌλλ°± / κ°μ νλ
λκΈ
λκΈ μ°κΈ°