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30-Minute Business Korean๐ค Day 29 ํผ๋๋ฐฑ ์ฃผ์๊ฒ ์ด์?.' ์กฐ์ธ์ ๊ตฌํ ๋ _ learn expressions for asking for feedback from colleagues or superiors
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29์ผ์ฐจ: ํผ๋๋ฐฑ ์์ฒญ ๋ฐ ์ ๊ณต
Day 29: Asking for and Giving Feedback
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์ค๋์ ๋๋ฃ๋ ์์ฌ์๊ฒ ํผ๋๋ฐฑ์ ์์ฒญํ๊ณ , ์๋๋ฐฉ์๊ฒ ์กฐ์ธ์ ์ค ๋ ์ฌ์ฉํ๋ ํํ๋ค์ ๋ฐฐ์๋ด
์๋ค.
Today, let's learn expressions for asking for feedback from colleagues or superiors and giving advice to others.
์ฌ๋ฌด์ค์์ ํ๋ก์ ํธ์ ๋ํด ๋ ผ์ํ๋ ๋ ๋ช ์ ๋น์ฆ๋์ค๋งจ [Two businessmen discussing a project in an office]
ํต์ฌ ๋ํ | Key Dialogue
A: ๋ถ์ฅ๋, ๋ฐฉ๊ธ ๋ฐํํ ๊ธฐํ์์ ๋ํด ํผ๋๋ฐฑ ์ข ์ฃผ์๊ฒ ์ด์?
A: Manager, would you please give me some feedback on the proposal I just presented?
B: ๋ค. ์ ์ฒด์ ์ผ๋ก ์์ฃผ ์ข์์ต๋๋ค. ๊ทธ๋ฐ๋ฐ ์์ฅ ๋ถ์ ์๋ฃ๋ ์กฐ๊ธ ๋ ๊ฐ์ ํ๋ ๊ฒ์ด ์ข๊ฒ ์ด์.
B: Yes. Overall, it was very good. But it would be good to improve the market analysis data a little more.
A: ์๊ฒ ์ต๋๋ค. ์กฐ์ธ ๊ฐ์ฌํฉ๋๋ค. ๋ค์ ๋ฐํ ๋๋ ๋ ์ํ๋๋ก ํ๊ฒ ์ต๋๋ค.
A: Understood. Thank you for the advice. I will try to do better in the next presentation.
์ดํ ๋ฐ ํํ ํ์ต | Vocabulary & Expressions
์ด๋ค ์ผ์ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ์ ๋ํ ๋ฐ์์ด๋ ์๊ฒฌ์ ๋ปํฉ๋๋ค. ํนํ ๊ฐ์ ์ ์ํ ์๊ฒฌ์ ๋งํ ๋ ์์ฃผ ์ฌ์ฉํฉ๋๋ค.
It means a reaction or opinion on the result of something. It is often used especially when giving opinions for improvement.
์๋ฌธ | Example
์ด๋ฒ ํ๋ก์ ํธ์ ๋ํ ํ์๋ค์ ํผ๋๋ฐฑ์ ๋ฃ๊ณ ์ถ์ต๋๋ค.
I would like to hear the team members' feedback on this project.
์๋๋ฐฉ์ด ๋ ๋์ ๋ฐฉํฅ์ผ๋ก ๋์๊ฐ๋๋ก ๋์์ฃผ๋ ๋ง์ด๋ ์๊ฒฌ์ ๋ปํฉ๋๋ค.
It means words or opinions that help the other person move in a better direction.
์๋ฌธ | Example
์ ๋ฐฐ๋์ ์กฐ์ธ ๋๋ถ์ ์ข์ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฅผ ์ป์ ์ ์์์ต๋๋ค.
Thanks to my senior's advice, I was able to get good results.
๋ถ์กฑํ๊ฑฐ๋ ์๋ชป๋ ์ ์ ๊ณ ์ณ ๋ ์ข๊ฒ ๋ง๋๋ ๊ฒ์ ์๋ฏธํฉ๋๋ค.
It means to fix something that is lacking or wrong to make it better.
์๋ฌธ | Example
๊ณ ๊ฐ์ ์๊ตฌ์ฌํญ์ ๋ฐ์ํ์ฌ ์๋น์ค๋ฅผ ๊ฐ์ ํ๊ฒ ์ต๋๋ค.
We will improve the service by reflecting the customer's requirements.
๋ฌธ๋ฒ ํ์ต | Grammar Study
์๋๋ฐฉ์๊ฒ ์ ์คํ๊ฒ ์ด๋ค ํ๋์ ํด๋ฌ๋ผ๊ณ ๋ถํํ ๋ ์ฌ์ฉํฉ๋๋ค.
Used when politely asking someone to do something for you.
์๋ฌธ | Example
์ด ์๋ฅ ์ข ํ์ธํด ์ฃผ์๊ฒ ์ด์?
Would you please check this document?
์๋๋ฐฉ์๊ฒ ๋ถ๋๋ฝ๊ฒ ์ ์์ด๋ ์กฐ์ธ์ ํ ๋ ์ฌ์ฉํฉ๋๋ค.
Used to gently make a suggestion or give advice to someone.
์๋ฌธ | Example
์ด ๋ถ๋ถ์ ๋ค์ ํ๋ฒ ๊ฒํ ํด ๋ณด๋ ๊ฒ์ด ์ข๊ฒ ์ต๋๋ค.
It would be good to review this part one more time.
์ด๋ค ๋ชฉํ๋ ์ํ๋ฅผ ์ํด ๋ ธ๋ ฅํ๊ฑฐ๋, ์์ง๋ฅผ ํํํ ๋ ์ฌ์ฉํฉ๋๋ค.
Used to express effort or determination towards a certain goal or state.
์๋ฌธ | Example
๋ง๊ฐ ๊ธฐํ์ ๋ง์ถ๋๋ก ํ๊ฒ ์ต๋๋ค.
I will make sure to meet the deadline.
์ฐ์ต๋ฌธ์ | Practice Problem
๋ค์ ๋น์นธ์ ์๋ง์ ๋จ์ด๋ ํํ์ ๋ฃ์ด ๋ฌธ์ฅ์ ์์ฑํ์ธ์.
Complete the following sentence by filling in the blank with the correct word or expression.
A: ๋ถ์ฅ๋, ์ ๊ฐ ๋ฐํํ ๋ด์ฉ์ ๋ํด _________ (ํผ๋๋ฐฑ)์ ์ข ์ฃผ์ค ์ ์์๊น์?
A: Manager, could you please give me some _________ on my presentation? (feedback)
B: ๋ค, ๋ค์์๋ ์๋ฃ์ ์๊ฐ์ ์์๋ฅผ _________ (๊ฐ์ ํ๋ค)๋ ๊ฒ์ด ์ข๊ฒ ์ด์.
B: Yes, next time it would be good to _________ the visual elements of the material. (to improve)
์ ๋ต: ํผ๋๋ฐฑ / ๊ฐ์ ํ๋
Answer: ํผ๋๋ฐฑ / ๊ฐ์ ํ๋
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