TOPIK II ์“ฐ๊ธฐ 54๋ฒˆ ๐Ÿ“„ ์˜ˆ์ƒ๋ฌธ์ œ(5) ๋นˆ๋ถ€๊ฒฉ์ฐจ ํ•ด์†Œ _Writing Question 54: Disparity Between Rich and Poor

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TOPIK II ์“ฐ๊ธฐ 54๋ฒˆ: ๋นˆ๋ถ€๊ฒฉ์ฐจ์™€ ํ•ด์†Œ ๋ฐฉ์•ˆ | Writing Question 54: Disparity Between Rich and Poor | Super Real Korean
TOPIK II WRITING Q54

TOPIK II ์“ฐ๊ธฐ 54๋ฒˆ ์˜ˆ์ƒ๋ฌธ์ œ '๋นˆ๋ถ€๊ฒฉ์ฐจ์™€ ํ•ด์†Œ ๋ฐฉ์•ˆ'

Writing Question 54: The Disparity Between Rich and Poor and Ways to Resolve It

๋ฌธ์ œ (Problem Statement):

๋นˆ๋ถ€๊ฒฉ์ฐจ์˜ ์›์ธ๊ณผ ๋ฌธ์ œ์ ์„ ์„ค๋ช…ํ•˜๊ณ , ์ด๋ฅผ ๊ทน๋ณตํ•˜๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•œ ์‚ฌํšŒ์ ·์ œ๋„์  ๋ฐฉ์•ˆ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๋…ผ์ˆ ํ•˜์‹œ์˜ค.

Explain the causes and problems of the rich-poor gap, and discuss social and institutional measures to overcome them.

๋นˆ๋ถ€๊ฒฉ์ฐจ์™€ ํ•ด์†Œ ๋ฐฉ์•ˆ - Disparity Between Rich and Poor

๐Ÿ“ ๋ชจ๋ฒ” ๋‹ต์•ˆ ๋ฐ ํ•ด์„ค (Example Answer & Explanation)

๐Ÿ” ๋ฐฐ๊ฒฝ ๋ฐ ์›์ธ (Background and Causes)

๋นˆ๋ถ€๊ฒฉ์ฐจ๋Š” ์‚ฌํšŒ ๊ฒฝ์ œ์  ๋ถˆํ‰๋“ฑ์ด ์‹ฌํ™”๋˜๋ฉด์„œ ๋ฐœ์ƒํ•˜๋Š” ํ˜„์ƒ์œผ๋กœ, ์ž์‚ฐ, ์†Œ๋“, ๊ต์œก, ๊ธฐํšŒ ๋“ฑ ๋‹ค์–‘ํ•œ ์ธก๋ฉด์—์„œ ๋‚˜ํƒ€๋‚ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ฃผ๋œ ์›์ธ์œผ๋กœ๋Š” ‘๋…ธ๋™ ์‹œ์žฅ์˜ ์ด์ค‘ ๊ตฌ์กฐ’์™€ ‘์ž๋ณธ ์†Œ๋“์˜ ๋ถˆ๊ท ํ˜•’์„ ๋“ค ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋Œ€๊ธฐ์—…๊ณผ ์ค‘์†Œ๊ธฐ์—… ๊ฐ„์˜ ์ž„๊ธˆ ๋ฐ ๋ณต์ง€ ๊ฒฉ์ฐจ๋Š” ๊ณ ์ฐฉํ™”๋˜์–ด, ์ด๋Š” ๊ณง ๋ถˆํ‰๋“ฑ์˜ ์‹ฌํ™”๋ฅผ ์ดˆ๋ž˜ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋˜ํ•œ, ๋ถ€๋™์‚ฐ์ด๋‚˜ ์ฃผ์‹๊ณผ ๊ฐ™์€ ์ž๋ณธ ์†Œ๋“์ด ๋…ธ๋™ ์†Œ๋“๋ณด๋‹ค ๋น ๋ฅด๊ฒŒ ์ฆ๊ฐ€ํ•˜๋ฉด์„œ, ์ด๋ฏธ ์ž์‚ฐ์„ ๊ฐ€์ง„ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๊ณผ ๊ทธ๋ ‡์ง€ ์•Š์€ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ ๊ฐ„์˜ ๊ฒฉ์ฐจ๊ฐ€ ๋”์šฑ ๋ฒŒ์–ด์ง€๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

๐Ÿšจ ๋ฌธ์ œ์  (Problems)

๋นˆ๋ถ€๊ฒฉ์ฐจ์˜ ์‹ฌํ™”๋Š” ๋‹จ์ˆœํžˆ ๊ฒฝ์ œ์  ๋ฌธ์ œ๋ฅผ ๋„˜์–ด ์‚ฌํšŒ ์ „๋ฐ˜์— ๊ฑธ์ณ ์‹ฌ๊ฐํ•œ ๋ฌธ์ œ๋ฅผ ์•ผ๊ธฐํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ฒซ์งธ, ์‚ฌํšŒ ‘ํ†ตํ•ฉ์˜ ์ €ํ•ด’๋ฅผ ๋ถˆ๋Ÿฌ์˜ต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ฒฝ์ œ์  ์ง€์œ„์— ๋”ฐ๋ผ ๊ณ„์ธต ๊ฐ„ ๊ฐˆ๋“ฑ์ด ์‹ฌํ™”๋˜๊ณ , ์‚ฌํšŒ ๊ตฌ์„ฑ์›์œผ๋กœ์„œ์˜ ์†Œ์†๊ฐ๊ณผ ์—ฐ๋Œ€ ์˜์‹์ด ์•ฝํ™”๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‘˜์งธ, ‘์„ฑ์žฅ ๋™๋ ฅ์˜ ์•ฝํ™”’๋ฅผ ์ดˆ๋ž˜ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์†Œ์ˆ˜์˜ ๋ถ€์œ ์ธต์— ๋ถ€๊ฐ€ ์ง‘์ค‘๋˜๋ฉด ๋‹ค์ˆ˜์˜ ์†Œ๋น„๋ ฅ์ด ์œ„์ถ•๋˜์–ด ๋‚ด์ˆ˜ ๊ฒฝ์ œ๊ฐ€ ํ™œ์„ฑํ™”๋˜์ง€ ๋ชปํ•˜๊ณ , ์ด๋Š” ์žฅ๊ธฐ์ ์ธ ๊ฒฝ์ œ ์„ฑ์žฅ์„ ์ €ํ•ดํ•˜๋Š” ์š”์ธ์ด ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

๐Ÿค ํ•ด์†Œ ๋ฐฉ์•ˆ (Ways to Resolve It)

๋นˆ๋ถ€๊ฒฉ์ฐจ ํ•ด์†Œ๋ฅผ ์œ„ํ•ด์„œ๋Š” ๋‹ค์Œ๊ณผ ๊ฐ™์€ ๋‹ค๊ฐ์ ์ธ ๋…ธ๋ ฅ์ด ํ•„์š”ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ฒซ์งธ, ‘์ •๋ถ€์˜ ์ ๊ทน์ ์ธ ์žฌ๋ถ„๋ฐฐ ์ •์ฑ…’์ด ํ•„์š”ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ˆ„์ง„์„ธ๋ฅผ ๊ฐ•ํ™”ํ•˜๊ณ , ๋ถˆํ‰๋“ฑ ์™„ํ™”๋ฅผ ์œ„ํ•œ ์‚ฌํšŒ ๋ณด์žฅ ์ œ๋„๋ฅผ ํ™•์ถฉํ•˜์—ฌ ์†Œ๋“๊ณผ ์ž์‚ฐ์˜ ์žฌ๋ถ„๋ฐฐ๋ฅผ ํšจ๊ณผ์ ์œผ๋กœ ์ด๋ฃจ์–ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‘˜์งธ, ‘๊ต์œก ๋ฐ ๊ธฐํšŒ์˜ ํ‰๋“ฑ ๋ณด์žฅ’์ด ์ค‘์š”ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ชจ๋“  ๊ณ„์ธต์˜ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค์ด ์–‘์งˆ์˜ ๊ต์œก์„ ๋ฐ›์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋„๋ก ์ง€์›ํ•˜๊ณ , ๊ณต์ •ํ•œ ๊ฒฝ์Ÿ ํ™˜๊ฒฝ์„ ์กฐ์„ฑํ•˜์—ฌ ๊ฐœ์ธ์˜ ๋…ธ๋ ฅ์ด ์ •๋‹นํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๋ณด์ƒ๋ฐ›์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์‚ฌํšŒ๋ฅผ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.


๐Ÿ“š ํ•ต์‹ฌ ์–ดํœ˜ (Core Vocabulary)

1. ๊ณ ์ฐฉํ™”๋˜๋‹ค (go-cha-kwa-doe-da)
์–ด๋–ค ํ˜„์ƒ์ด๋‚˜ ์ƒํƒœ๊ฐ€ ๊ตณ์–ด์ ธ ๋ณ€ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๊ฒŒ ๋˜๋‹ค.
(A certain phenomenon or state becomes solidified and unchangeable.)
2. ์žฌ๋ถ„๋ฐฐ (jae-bun-bae)
๊ตญ๊ฐ€๋‚˜ ์‚ฌํšŒ๊ฐ€ ์†Œ๋“์ด๋‚˜ ์ž์‚ฐ์„ ๋‹ค์‹œ ๋‚˜๋ˆ„์–ด ๋ถ„๋ฐฐํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ.
(The act of a country or society re-dividing and distributing income or assets.)

๐Ÿ’ก ์น˜ํŠธํ‚ค ๋ฌธ์žฅ ํ‘œํ˜„ (Cheat-Key Sentence Expressions)

~์„ ์•ผ๊ธฐํ•˜๋‹ค
"~์„ ์ผ์œผํ‚ค๋‹ค, ์ดˆ๋ž˜ํ•˜๋‹ค"์™€ ๊ฐ™์€ ์˜๋ฏธ๋กœ, ๋ถ€์ •์ ์ธ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฅผ ๊ฐ•์กฐํ•  ๋•Œ ์‚ฌ์šฉ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
(Used to emphasize a negative outcome.)
~์— ๊ทธ์น˜์ง€ ์•Š๊ณ 
"~์—์„œ ๋ฉˆ์ถ”์ง€ ์•Š๊ณ , ๋” ๋‚˜์•„๊ฐ€"๋ผ๋Š” ์˜๋ฏธ๋กœ, ๋ฌธ์ œ์˜ ํŒŒ๊ธ‰ ํšจ๊ณผ๋ฅผ ์„ค๋ช…ํ•  ๋•Œ ์œ ์šฉํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
(Used to explain the ripple effect of a problem.)
~๋ฅผ ์ €ํ•ดํ•˜๋‹ค
"~์„ ๋ฐฉํ•ดํ•˜๋‹ค"๋ผ๋Š” ์˜๋ฏธ๋กœ, ์–ด๋–ค ๋ฐœ์ „์ด๋‚˜ ์„ฑ์žฅ์„ ๋ง‰๋Š” ์š”์ธ์„ ์„ค๋ช…ํ•  ๋•Œ ์“ฐ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
(Used to explain factors that hinder development or growth.)

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