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TOPIK II ์“ฐ๊ธฐ 54๋ฒˆ ๐Ÿ“„ ์˜ˆ์ƒ๋ฌธ์ œ :Economic Cooperation and Future Growth (ํ•œ๊ตญ-๋ฒ ํŠธ๋‚จ ํ˜‘๋ ฅ๊ด€๊ณ„)

TOPIK II ์“ฐ๊ธฐ 54๋ฒˆ: ํ•œ-๋ฒ ํŠธ๋‚จ ๊ฒฝ์ œํ˜‘๋ ฅ๊ณผ ๋ฏธ๋ž˜ ์„ฑ์žฅ๋™๋ ฅ | ๊ณ ๊ธ‰ ํ•œ๊ตญ์–ด ํ•™์Šต

TOPIK ์‹œํ—˜ ์ค‘ ๊ฐ€์žฅ ๋‚œ์ด๋„๊ฐ€ ๋†’์€ 54๋ฒˆ ๋ฌธ์ œ ๋งˆ์Šคํ„ฐ๋ฅผ ์œ„ํ•ด ์–ดํœ˜, ๋ฌธ๋ฒ•, ๋ฌธ์žฅ๊ตฌ์„ฑ ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์น˜ํŠธํ‚ค ํ‘œํ˜„๊นŒ์ง€.. ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ๊ณ ๋“์ ์— ๋„์›€์„ ๋“œ๋ฆฝ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

To master the most difficult question, TOPIK 54, we provide vocabulary, grammar, sentence structure, and even cheat-sheet expressions to help you achieve a high score.

TOPIK II ์“ฐ๊ธฐ 54๋ฒˆ
ํ•œ๊ตญ-๋ฒ ํŠธ๋‚จ ๊ฒฝ์ œํ˜‘๋ ฅ๊ณผ ๋ฏธ๋ž˜ ์„ฑ์žฅ๋™๋ ฅ TOPIK II Writing Question 54: Korea-Vietnam Economic Cooperation and Future Growth Engines


์˜ˆ์ƒ๋ฌธ์ œ (Anticipated Question)

๋‹ค์Œ ๋‚ด์šฉ์„ ์ค‘์‹ฌ์œผ๋กœ ‘๊ตญ๊ฐ€ ๊ฐ„ ๊ฒฝ์ œํ˜‘๋ ฅ์˜ ์ค‘์š”์„ฑ’์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์ž์‹ ์˜ ์ƒ๊ฐ์„ 600~700์ž๋กœ ์“ฐ์‹œ์˜ค. (๋‹จ, ๋ฌธ์ œ์˜ ๋‚ด์šฉ์„ ๊ทธ๋Œ€๋กœ ์˜ฎ๊ฒจ ์“ฐ์ง€ ๋งˆ์‹œ์˜ค.)

Based on the following content, write your own thoughts on 'The importance of economic cooperation between countries' in 600-700 characters. (However, do not copy the content of the question as is.)

  • ๊ตญ๊ฐ€ ๊ฐ„ ๊ฒฝ์ œํ˜‘๋ ฅ์ด ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ์ด์œ ๋Š” ๋ฌด์—‡์ธ๊ฐ€? (Why is economic cooperation between countries necessary?)
  • ๊ฒฝ์ œํ˜‘๋ ฅ์€ ์–‘๊ตญ์— ์–ด๋–ค ์ด์ ์„ ๊ฐ€์ ธ๋‹ค์ฃผ๋Š”๊ฐ€? (What advantages does economic cooperation bring to both countries?)
  • ์ง€์†์ ์ธ ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์„ ์œ„ํ•ด ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ๋…ธ๋ ฅ์€ ๋ฌด์—‡์ธ๊ฐ€? (What efforts are needed for continuous cooperation?)

๋ฌธ์ œ ํ•ด์„ค (Question Analysis)

์ด ๋ฌธ์ œ๋Š” ๊ตญ๊ฐ€ ๊ฐ„ ๊ฒฝ์ œํ˜‘๋ ฅ์˜ ์ค‘์š”์„ฑ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๋…ผ๋ฆฌ์ ์œผ๋กœ ์„œ์ˆ ํ•˜๋Š” ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์„ ํ‰๊ฐ€ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์„œ๋ก ์—์„œ๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์ œํ˜‘๋ ฅ์˜ ํ•„์š”์„ฑ์„ ์–ธ๊ธ‰ํ•˜๊ณ , ๋ณธ๋ก ์—์„œ๋Š” ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์ด ๊ฐ€์ ธ๋‹ค์ฃผ๋Š” ์ด์ ๋“ค์„ ๊ตฌ์ฒด์ ์œผ๋กœ ์„ค๋ช…ํ•ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰์œผ๋กœ ๊ฒฐ๋ก ์—์„œ๋Š” ์ง€์†์ ์ธ ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์„ ์œ„ํ•œ ๊ตฌ์ฒด์ ์ธ ๋ฐฉ์•ˆ์„ ์ œ์‹œํ•˜๋ฉฐ ๊ธ€์„ ๋งˆ๋ฌด๋ฆฌํ•ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํŠนํžˆ ๋””์ง€ํ„ธ, ์ฒจ๋‹จ์‚ฐ์—…, ๊ณต๊ธ‰๋ง, ์—๋„ˆ์ง€ ๋ถ„์•ผ ๋“ฑ ๋ณธ๋ฌธ์—์„œ ์ œ์‹œ๋œ ๋‚ด์šฉ์„ ํ™œ์šฉํ•˜๋ฉด ๊ณ ๋“์ ์— ์œ ๋ฆฌํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

This question assesses your ability to logically describe the importance of economic cooperation between countries. In the introduction, you should mention the necessity of economic cooperation. In the body, you must specifically explain the advantages that cooperation brings. Finally, in the conclusion, you should conclude the writing by proposing concrete solutions for continuous cooperation. Utilizing the content presented in the main text, such as digital, advanced industries, supply chains, and energy sectors, is advantageous for a high score.


๋ชจ๋ฒ” ์˜ˆ์‹œ ๋‹ต์•ˆ (Sample Answer)

์ตœ๊ทผ ์„ธ๊ณ„ํ™”์™€ ๊ธฐ์ˆ  ๋ฐœ์ „์œผ๋กœ ์ธํ•ด ๊ตญ๊ฐ€ ๊ฐ„์˜ ๊ฒฝ๊ณ„๊ฐ€ ๋ชจํ˜ธํ•ด์ง€๋ฉด์„œ ๊ฒฝ์ œํ˜‘๋ ฅ์˜ ์ค‘์š”์„ฑ์ด ๋”์šฑ ์ปค์ง€๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค. ๊ฐ ๋‚˜๋ผ๋Š” ์ž๊ตญ์˜ ์ด์ต์„ ๊ทน๋Œ€ํ™”ํ•˜๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด ๋‹ค์–‘ํ•œ ํ˜•ํƒœ์˜ ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์„ ์ถ”์ง„ํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์œผ๋ฉฐ, ์ด๋Š” ๋‹จ์ˆœํžˆ ๊ฒฝ์ œ์  ์ด์ต์„ ๋„˜์–ด์„  ๊ฐ€์น˜๋ฅผ ์ฐฝ์ถœํ•œ๋‹ค. ์ด๋Ÿฌํ•œ ๋ฐฐ๊ฒฝ์—์„œ ํ•œ-๋ฒ ํŠธ๋‚จ ๋น„์ฆˆ๋‹ˆ์Šค ํฌ๋Ÿผ๊ณผ ๊ฐ™์€ ํ–‰์‚ฌ๋Š” ์–‘๊ตญ ๊ด€๊ณ„๋ฅผ ํ•œ ๋‹จ๊ณ„ ๋” ๋ฐœ์ „์‹œํ‚ค๋Š” ์ค‘์š”ํ•œ ๊ณ„๊ธฐ๊ฐ€ ๋œ๋‹ค.

Recently, as national borders have become blurred due to globalization and technological development, the importance of economic cooperation has grown even more. Each country is pursuing various forms of cooperation to maximize its own interests, and this creates value that goes beyond mere economic benefits. In this context, events like the Korea-Vietnam Business Forum become an important opportunity to develop relations between the two countries one step further.

๊ตญ๊ฐ€ ๊ฐ„ ๊ฒฝ์ œํ˜‘๋ ฅ์€ ์šฐ์„  ์„œ๋กœ์˜ ์•ฝ์ ์„ ๋ณด์™„ํ•˜๊ณ  ๊ฐ•์ ์„ ๊ทน๋Œ€ํ™”ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ณต๋™์˜ ์„ฑ์žฅ๋™๋ ฅ์„ ํ™•๋ณดํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ํ•„์ˆ˜์ ์ด๋‹ค. ํ•œ๊ตญ์€ ์ฒจ๋‹จ ๊ธฐ์ˆ ๊ณผ ์ž๋ณธ๋ ฅ์„, ๋ฒ ํŠธ๋‚จ์€ ํ’๋ถ€ํ•œ ๋…ธ๋™๋ ฅ๊ณผ ์ƒ์‚ฐ ์ž ์žฌ๋ ฅ์„ ๊ฐ€์ง€๊ณ  ์žˆ์–ด ์ƒํ˜ธ ๋ณด์™„์ ์ธ ๊ด€๊ณ„๋ฅผ ํ˜•์„ฑํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‹ค. ์ด๋Ÿฌํ•œ ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์€ ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ์‹œ์žฅ์„ ์ฐฝ์ถœํ•˜๊ณ , ๋””์ง€ํ„ธ ๋ฐ ์ฒจ๋‹จ์‚ฐ์—… ๋ถ„์•ผ์—์„œ ๊ณต๋™ ์—ฐ๊ตฌ ๊ฐœ๋ฐœ์„ ํ†ตํ•ด ๊ธ€๋กœ๋ฒŒ ๊ฒฝ์Ÿ๋ ฅ์„ ๋†’์ด๋Š” ์ด์ ์„ ๊ฐ€์ ธ๋‹ค์ค€๋‹ค. ๋˜ํ•œ, ์•ˆ์ •์ ์ธ ๊ณต๊ธ‰๋ง์„ ๊ตฌ์ถ•ํ•˜์—ฌ ๊ธ‰๋ณ€ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ตญ์ œ ์ •์„ธ ์†์—์„œ๋„ ๊ฒฝ์ œ์  ์•ˆ์ •์„ฑ์„ ํ™•๋ณดํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‹ค.

First, economic cooperation between countries is essential for securing a common growth engine that complements each other's weaknesses and maximizes strengths. Korea has advanced technology and capital, while Vietnam has abundant labor and production potential, allowing them to form a mutually complementary relationship. This cooperation creates new markets and brings the advantage of increasing global competitiveness through joint research and development in digital and advanced industries. Furthermore, it can secure economic stability in the rapidly changing international situation by establishing a stable supply chain.

์ด์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ์–‘๊ตญ์ด ์ง€์†์ ์ธ ํ˜‘๋ ฅ๊ด€๊ณ„๋ฅผ ์œ ์ง€ํ•˜๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด์„œ๋Š” ๋ช‡ ๊ฐ€์ง€ ๋…ธ๋ ฅ์ด ํ•„์š”ํ•˜๋‹ค. ๋จผ์ €, ์ •๋ถ€๋Š” ๊ธฐ์—…๋“ค์ด ํ˜‘๋ ฅํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์ œ๋„์  ๊ธฐ๋ฐ˜์„ ๋งˆ๋ จํ•˜๊ณ , ๊ฐ๊ตญ ๊ธฐ์—…๋“ค์„ ๋น„๋กฏํ•œ ๋‹ค์–‘ํ•œ ์ฃผ์ฒด๋“ค์ด ์ฐธ์—ฌํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ธฐํšŒ๋ฅผ ํ™•๋Œ€ํ•ด์•ผ ํ•œ๋‹ค. ๋˜ํ•œ, ๋ฌธํ™” ๊ต๋ฅ˜๋ฅผ ํ™œ์„ฑํ™”ํ•˜์—ฌ ์ƒํ˜ธ ์ดํ•ด๋ฅผ ๋†’์ด๊ณ , ๊ฒฝ์ œ์  ๋งˆ์ฐฐ์„ ์ตœ์†Œํ™”ํ•˜๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•œ ์ •๊ธฐ์ ์ธ ๋Œ€ํ™” ์ฑ„๋„์„ ๊ตฌ์ถ•ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๋„ ์ค‘์š”ํ•˜๋‹ค. ์ด์™€ ๊ฐ™์€ ๋…ธ๋ ฅ์„ ํ†ตํ•ด ํ•œ-๋ฒ ํŠธ๋‚จ ์–‘๊ตญ์€ ๊ธ‰๋ณ€ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ธ€๋กœ๋ฒŒ ํ™˜๊ฒฝ์— ๋Šฅ๋™์ ์œผ๋กœ ๋Œ€์‘ํ•˜๊ณ , ํ•จ๊ป˜ ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ๋ฏธ๋ž˜๋ฅผ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด ๋‚˜๊ฐˆ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์„ ๊ฒƒ์ด๋‹ค.

To maintain a continuous cooperative relationship, a few efforts are needed. First, the government must prepare an institutional foundation for companies to cooperate and expand opportunities for various entities, including companies from each country, to participate. It is also important to activate cultural exchange to enhance mutual understanding and establish regular dialogue channels to minimize economic friction. Through such efforts, Korea and Vietnam will be able to actively respond to the rapidly changing global environment and create a new future together.


ํ•ต์‹ฌ ์–ดํœ˜ ๋ฐ ๋ฌธ๋ฒ• (Key Vocabulary and Grammar)

์–‘ํ•ด๊ฐ์„œ(MOU)

์˜๋ฏธ: ๊ตญ๊ฐ€, ๊ธฐ์—…, ๊ธฐ๊ด€ ๊ฐ„์˜ ํ˜‘๋ ฅ ์˜์ง€๋ฅผ ๋‚˜ํƒ€๋‚ด๋Š” ๊ณต์‹์ ์ธ ๋ฌธ์„œ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ฒ•์  ๊ตฌ์†๋ ฅ์€ ์—†์ง€๋งŒ, ์ƒํ˜ธ ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์„ ์œ„ํ•œ ์ถœ๋ฐœ์ ์ด ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

Meaning: A formal document that signifies the intent to cooperate between countries, companies, or institutions. It is not legally binding but serves as a starting point for mutual cooperation.

์˜ˆ์‹œ:
1. ์–‘๊ตญ์€ ์—๋„ˆ์ง€ ๋ถ„์•ผ์˜ ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์„ ์œ„ํ•ด ์–‘ํ•ด๊ฐ์„œ(MOU)๋ฅผ ๋งบ์—ˆ๋‹ค. (The two countries signed an MOU for cooperation in the energy sector.)
2. ์ด๋ฒˆ ์–‘ํ•ด๊ฐ์„œ ์ฒด๊ฒฐ์„ ๊ณ„๊ธฐ๋กœ ์–‘๊ตญ ๊ด€๊ณ„๊ฐ€ ๋”์šฑ ๋ฐœ์ „ํ•  ๊ฒƒ์ด๋‹ค. (The signing of this MOU will be an opportunity for relations between the two countries to develop further.)

์„ฑ์žฅ๋™๋ ฅ

์˜๋ฏธ: ์„ฑ์žฅ์„ ์ด๋„๋Š” ์›๋™๋ ฅ์ด๋‚˜ ํ•ต์‹ฌ์ ์ธ ์š”์†Œ. ๊ฒฝ์ œ ๋ฐœ์ „์ด๋‚˜ ๊ธฐ์—…์˜ ์„ฑ์žฅ์— ํฐ ์˜ํ–ฅ์„ ๋ฏธ์น˜๋Š” ์š”์†Œ๋ฅผ ๋œปํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

Meaning: The driving force or core element that leads to growth. It refers to a factor that has a significant impact on economic development or a company's growth.

์˜ˆ์‹œ:
1. ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ๊ธฐ์ˆ  ๊ฐœ๋ฐœ์€ ๊ธฐ์—…์˜ ๋ฏธ๋ž˜ ์„ฑ์žฅ๋™๋ ฅ์ด ๋  ๊ฒƒ์ด๋‹ค. (Developing new technology will become the company's future growth engine.)
2. ์ •๋ถ€๋Š” ์ฒจ๋‹จ์‚ฐ์—…์„ ๊ตญ๊ฐ€์˜ ์„ฑ์žฅ๋™๋ ฅ์œผ๋กœ ์‚ผ์•„ ์ง‘์ค‘ ์œก์„ฑํ•  ๊ณ„ํš์ด๋‹ค. (The government plans to focus on and nurture advanced industries as the nation's growth engine.)

~์„/๋ฅผ ๋น„๋กฏํ•ด

์˜๋ฏธ: ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ ๋Œ€์ƒ ์ค‘์—์„œ ๋Œ€ํ‘œ์ ์ธ ๊ฒƒ์„ ํ•˜๋‚˜ ์ œ์‹œํ•˜๊ณ , ๊ทธ ์™ธ์— ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์ด ๋” ์žˆ์Œ์„ ๋‚˜ํƒ€๋‚ผ ๋•Œ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. "A๋ฅผ ํฌํ•จํ•˜์—ฌ B, C"์™€ ๊ฐ™์€ ์˜๋ฏธ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

Meaning: Used to present a representative item from a group and indicate that there are other items in addition to it. It has a similar meaning to "including A, B, and C."

์˜ˆ์‹œ:
1. ๊น€๋ฏผ์„ ๊ตญ๋ฌด์ด๋ฆฌ๋ฅผ ๋น„๋กฏํ•ด ๋งŽ์€ ๊ธฐ์—…์ธ์ด ํ–‰์‚ฌ์— ์ฐธ์„ํ–ˆ๋‹ค. (Many businesspeople, including Prime Minister Kim Min-seok, attended the event.)
2. ์—๋„ˆ์ง€, ์กฐ์„ ์„ ๋น„๋กฏํ•ด ๋‹ค์–‘ํ•œ ๋ถ„์•ผ์—์„œ ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์ด ๋…ผ์˜๋˜์—ˆ๋‹ค. (Cooperation was discussed in various fields, including energy and shipbuilding.)


์‹ค๋ ฅ ์ ๊ฒ€ ๋ฌธ์ œ (Practice Question)

๋นˆ์นธ์— ์•Œ๋งž์€ ๋ง์„ ์“ฐ์‹œ์˜ค. (Fill in the blank with the correct word.)

์–‘๊ตญ์€ ๊ธ‰๋ณ€ํ•˜๋Š” ํ™˜๊ฒฝ์— ๋Šฅ๋™์ ์œผ๋กœ ๋Œ€์‘ํ•˜๊ณ  ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด             ์„ ๋ฐœ๊ตดํ•ด์•ผ ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ณตํ†ต์˜ ์ˆ™์ œ๋ฅผ ์•ˆ๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค.

Both countries have a common task of actively responding to the rapidly changing environment and discovering new             .

์ •๋‹ต: ์„ฑ์žฅ๋™๋ ฅ


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